Turning On Yellow

Turning On Yellow

A Poem by The Twin Arenas
"

the fewtch

"
Take two
watching cars,
old broke love

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we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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you wrote enough too read too much into it. we all add ours into it & read sooo much; which is true, for most of us. thank you, for putting so many words in something so messy in most of our lives. great write! keep them coming!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Brevity at this level difficult to achieve. Good for you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice place create by your words. Left reader with location and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago



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