Turning On Yellow

Turning On Yellow

A Poem by Waconda Springs
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the fewtch

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Take two
watching cars,
old broke love

© 2016 Waconda Springs



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we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Brevity at this level difficult to achieve. Good for you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.

j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice place create by your words. Left reader with location and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Waconda Springs

Edmonton, Canada



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