A Poem by Waconda Springs

the fewtch

It is enough
to take 

freshly fallen


What will
jar bones.

buds blossom out
and away

out and away

out and away under
my toque
and all the space
between the sound
and the drum
thin like a bulrush,
my fingers frozen,
won't f**k with

© 2017 Waconda Springs

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I really enjoyed this... lovely work.. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago

I love the starkness of this poem, befits winter very well in my opinion. The starkness says so much and yet so little, superb :) Like a wintered tree, bare and yet so wise.

Posted 5 Months Ago

"Thin like a bulrush,
my fingers frozen,
won't f**k with"
Beautiful lady lines. Enjoying reading the piece.
Keep up the good work!🙂

Posted 5 Months Ago

I like how bare it is. No fluff or sentimental drivel.

It opens up almost like a haiku

Places the reader out in nature

but then in the second part it switches gear

Something about space drums fingers

Like the line 'between the sound and the drum'

Kinda reminds me of a Wallace Stevens snow poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago

to visualise the space between the sound and the drum was enough to satisfy me in this read :D now I am visualising frozen fingers cracking off in the harsh winter (I don't know too much about harsh winter's being for Sydney and all)

nice to see you X

Posted 5 Months Ago

fall is the best time to write...seems that October and November are poets' months...
the fingers might actually get moving again...
funny the irony...we thaw in fall...and freeze up in spring when it comes to writing.

Cool piece.

Posted 5 Months Ago

Waconda Springs

5 Months Ago

Ha, you're right.
Nice... I enjoyed reading....

Keep writing 👍

Posted 5 Months Ago

Waconda Springs

5 Months Ago

i got more. i was hot for it years ago, after personal forest fires. now i burn for control, and t.. read more
Waconda Springs

5 Months Ago

"AREN'T" nearly as exciting.

5 Months Ago

The first one after a while is always a little rusty but this... great job!

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Added on November 7, 2017
Last Updated on November 7, 2017


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Edmonton, Canada

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