Society!

This is one of the many songs I have written lately. I will post some more, and I'm also curious to see if any one can guess my favorite band! :]

My conscious is on the edge, of what is right and wrong.

My greed is measured by, all the risks that I take.

I take for granted, all of the little things.

My life is scarred by my,

By my paths!

I can't forgive and I don't know how to forget.

I'll help you up but don't expect sincerity.

The world revolves around every step that I take.

My fame's your sacrament, and I'll make sure you partake.

[Chorus]

I don't expect you to, pity me!

I don't expect you to lift me up!

I'll forge my own, I walk alone,

I don't need your help!

I'm all around you, I surround you,

I'm every breath that they take!

I'll follow you if you'll follow me,

with every step that you fake.

Society!

I can yell pretty well, and I'll bring down the sky.

Armageddon flames, if you soil my name.

You're the cockroach that lives underneath my shoe.

Hey you, guess what? Yeah, you. I got more dough than you!

I mock you and your sense, of Bohemia.

Because I'm jealous of your anarchist cliche'.

I'm wrapped up in this suit like a straight jacket.

I'm at the top of my game and all I have is shame.

[Chorus]

I was tortured when I was just a lad.

Can you blame me for still being mad?

You lied your way to the top of a corporate ladder.

And yet here I am, still just your bully fodder!

You pompous prick with arrogant eyes,

you hide behind your mask of lies.

I've got a plan for you and your friends,

I'll torment you to the bitter ends!

[Chorus]

    

Reviews

[Ethereal Brookes]

this made me smile haha i like all the things you compared society to, its well fitting. :)

[Twistedme]

This is the kind of thing I like to read, I believe we share similar aspects on things such as society. I enjoy your use of metaphor aswell, something I quite like using myself haha good stuff man

[Walker Andreasen]

Well thank you!

[Pax]

i'd like to hear the melody of this song. its very nice. keep creating.

[Walker Andreasen]

If I could find my mic I would record a lot of my songs and put them on here but I lost it in the move...

[Pax]

that's sad. i think in time you'll be able to do that.

[Walker Andreasen]

Yeah. I think I know where it is I'm just to lazy to go get it. Haha

[Pax]

haha...i know the feeling

[Sarah Redigan]

Absolutely amazing .. I didn't want it to end

[Walker Andreasen]

Why is that might I ask? Curious.

[Sarah Redigan]

just its strong very strong .... to me it makes me think that no matter what happens in life that you can depend on yourself and you can always make it through cuz everyone has it with in themselves to over come anything you put your mind too

[Walker Andreasen]

Hmm. That's an interesting take on it. That's not how I wrote it but I like it. I like it a lot.

[Sarah Redigan]

lol well im glad you like it