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A Poem by Whales

this is fictional. MY father was a great man.

His fathers arms were long ropes
That whipped him every night.
Penetrating deep within his skin.
The scars
On his back
Would not stop bleeding
The son tried to defend himself
But he was too young, too weak and too depressed.
He could do nothing.
The End

© 2013 Whales

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This is very sad, and it's sad to know that some parents do abuse their kids. Emotional write, excellent job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

there were other scars, too, some that would never heal, and no matter how old, there is always too weak and too depressed

the end

Posted 6 Years Ago

This def evokes sadness, but you def can take this further. I've read your stuff before and know you have the abilities:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

yea I know I could of but i wanted it to be short. I know why but i can't explain it...just jump int.. read more
This was really deep and kind of depression. Very powerful though!

Posted 6 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on September 23, 2012
Last Updated on September 18, 2013
Tags: Whales



Southborough, MA

About After writing this so many times I'm just gunna say it simple. I hate my poetry here but I don't want to delete it because or memories or whatever. But, I like s.. more..


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