A Uke And Small Dinners

A Uke And Small Dinners

A Poem by Whales
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WATQUTZIE

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With snakes in my brain
And coconuts filling my ears
I play your uke softly
Slither and slide that
Slimy sluggle.
Embracing it through my ears
Slimy dirty shlick shlop shlobadabloo
oUt HeRe I loathe my brain with all its beauty.
I understand what is
There are somethings in this world
That are not real
I can't believe this things anymore.
Pots and Pans dangle like a noose
It's all to0 crazy
OUt heRE
I have lost my small automobile
By the stars and shapes of whales
This life has no meaning anymore.
This squiggly red line doesn't help me

© 2012 Whales



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Whales
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You are wonderful with words

Posted 5 Years Ago


I'd love to hear you read this out loud

Posted 5 Years Ago


eglantine

5 Years Ago

haha no! I'd be up for that. I'm just at work and then meeting my mom for supper but later for sure.. read more
eglantine

5 Years Ago

my skype name is ms.wordspinner
Whales

5 Years Ago

wordtastic when you see zipa300 added you that's me. also what time do you think you'll be on?
Love this, it's different!
"with snakes in my brain
And coconuts in my ears"
Nice start
The ending is sad though :(

Ohhhhh and one more thing:
Do you mean these instead of this in the lines
I

" I can't believe this things anymore"
Wonderful job

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Whales
Whales

Southborough, MA



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