A Folded Leprechaun

#yolo #thug lyfe #lol #lolwhateven #!!!!!!!!

Stranded here I see no leave

Or leaves

Whale ever you find comforting

I can barely see my breath 

In this night as cold as

I see nothing anymore

Black Black Black

Attack Attack Attack

All I do is see.

Everything is not what iS SUposSED to be

I'm scared 

I'm Alone

And I don't want to live any longer.

Reviews

[Emily B]

we find ourselves a place apart
behind light words that tease and flout
but, oh, the agitated heart
till someone find us really out

sometimes, you know, we have to be real literal, we have to say what we feel, put all our cards on the table, sometimes we have to be real

[eglantine]

.... creative. I would never have thought about using the computer as such to help influence the meaning of the poem to reach the audience on a deeper, more psychological level.

[Allycat]

#what
Is my computer glitching or is there no writing here besides your title and authors note?
pw you so silly

[Whales]

there is writing and your computer isn't glitching. lets see if you can figure it out. that goes for anyone who sees this

[Allycat]

oh god I just highlighted this, I understand now..
:( you ok?

[Whales]

absolutely not. but i'm looking forward to our party of two this coming Sunday!

[Allycat]

same :D and I'll try and send you some stuff to make you feel slightly better, I know it doesn't fix the problem but I'm gonna do it anyway :D
I hope you feel better pw