A Folded Leprechaun

A Folded Leprechaun

A Poem by Whales
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#yolo #thug lyfe #lol #lolwhateven #!!!!!!!!

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Stranded here I see no leave
Or leaves

Whale ever you find comforting

I can barely see my breath 
In this night as cold as
I see nothing anymore
Black Black Black
Attack Attack Attack
All I do is see.
Everything is not what iS SUposSED to be
I'm scared 
I'm Alone
And I don't want to live any longer.

© 2012 Whales



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we find ourselves a place apart
behind light words that tease and flout
but, oh, the agitated heart
till someone find us really out

sometimes, you know, we have to be real literal, we have to say what we feel, put all our cards on the table, sometimes we have to be real

Posted 5 Years Ago


.... creative. I would never have thought about using the computer as such to help influence the meaning of the poem to reach the audience on a deeper, more psychological level.

Posted 5 Years Ago


#what
Is my computer glitching or is there no writing here besides your title and authors note?
pw you so silly

Posted 5 Years Ago


Allycat

5 Years Ago

oh god I just highlighted this, I understand now..
:( you ok?
Whales

5 Years Ago

absolutely not. but i'm looking forward to our party of two this coming Sunday!
Allycat

5 Years Ago

same :D and I'll try and send you some stuff to make you feel slightly better, I know it doesn't fix.. read more

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Added on October 4, 2012
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Whales
Whales

Southborough, MA



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