Attack The Fellows

Attack The Fellows

A Poem by Whales

Go Go
See that no one is returning.
Something's not right now here.
s=Just Stop living.
Apples in my arms
There's something off here
Everything I see is what is to be seen and I want to cease existence
Goodbye world and all who inhabit it.
For I, Sam Kendall of 16 years will no longer be here.
For I am a different being
Goodbye all you who care and I'm sorry for this
But I will stay alive until the moon dies
And many fellows will attack me through rope and a fan.
Dancing in the moon light
Please. Just one last dance.
Before I'm gone
There is something not right here.
Vu Vu Vu Vu Vu Vu Vu 

© 2012 Whales

Author's Note

Why do I even try.

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But I will stay alive until the moon dies" .... why didn't i write that first?!?!? hahaha I'm jealous of that line. like the ending vu's. adds to the whole vague slightly blurred uncertainty-deja vu thing

Posted 5 Years Ago

This is very raw, I really like this
Please be ok

Posted 5 Years Ago

in poetic years you must be at least 97 years young, you are a veritable sage when you write poetry

Posted 5 Years Ago

Beautiful I love the moon parts

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on October 9, 2012
Last Updated on December 9, 2012



Southborough, MA

About After writing this so many times I'm just gunna say it simple. I hate my poetry here but I don't want to delete it because or memories or whatever. But, I like s.. more..


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