Nothing lasts

You'll forgive me when you read this

Dear love,

              I don't how long this would last
              But I know that someday I'll be from your past
              And I'll tell them about you if they asked
              How perfect you was
              A natural human being with no flaws
              All you were searching for is peace of mind
              A whole different level of kind
              It's like you could see but your were totally blind
              Nothing that you can nowadays find
           And I know after I tell them this they'll want to know more
  And then they'll ask questions that I don't have an answer for      
Like if he was to die for, Why did everything had to end? What for?
              I'd just say that everything must have an end
              Then they would just feel offend
              Because they were waiting for an extend
              I'll tell them that i just couldn't pretend
              Because
              Everything was right
              And this made me feel fright
              Cause life can't be too perfect
              Because everything have a side effect
              So I had to leave before I witness
              Also I promised him to be there in thickness
              And I didn't even ask for his forgiveness
              I had to leave before anything goes wrong
              Otherwise he'll be a regret that i will carry all life long
              But that wouldn't be fair
              Then things would of happened that i am unable to repair
              So i chose to leave with a good memory
              You might think I'm wrong but what we had was treasury
             I had to end everything before life strikes
             And I know this is not the type of story that satisfy your likes
              But sometimes you just have to deal with things
              And sometimes you just can't deal with what life brings..

Reviews

[stars are far]

that hit my heart directly, it was very great, i loved this so much, will be added to my library :))

[Anotherlifemaybe]

Thank you so much. Your comment simply made my day. :)

[micky]

In line 4 it would be better if you say" how perfect it was" line 2 "why did everything have to end" and the rhyming feels forced, otherwise the piece is good:)

[Anotherlifemaybe]

Thank you for your suggestions. In line 4 I intended writing about how perfect he was, cause I wasn't focusing the poem rhyming or not it was all about him at that point.