One Moment

One Moment

A Poem by WhiteWillow

At first, quarter past;
all seemed to be standing still
...until the hands moved.

© 2014 WhiteWillow



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wow.. few words and great writing.. thousands ways to contemplate

Posted 2 Years Ago


and then the hands moved...life holding its breath until the next move...like the moments in a baseball game in between pitches..the inaction is still an action.

Posted 2 Years Ago


WhiteWillow

2 Years Ago

Lovely interpretation! I think it"s what i love most about sharing my writing: seeing what others se.. read more
The unseen hands of the Universe perhaps? Brilliant haiku WW.

Posted 2 Years Ago


WhiteWillow

2 Years Ago

You're too kind. Thank you Anto
Time waits on no man It masters fate with earnest callous Caring for none in favored mercy helping no whom it shows malice.Wonderful thought and made me think again about the eternal river of time and place thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


WhiteWillow

2 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Tate, I appreciate it
Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

you are welcome nice to have you back

Nice, the timing was perfect in this short piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


WhiteWillow

2 Years Ago

Thank you willweb. No pun intended, I'm sure. ;)
willweb

2 Years Ago

Hmmmmmmmmm
A wonderful write indeed. Short but powerful...:)....

Posted 2 Years Ago


WhiteWillow

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sami. I love haikus. I spend more time on less words, and love the power they have.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)....

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WhiteWillow
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I'm just someone who enjoys writing. Its a great creative outlet, and I love challenging myself to write something better. Being among others who share in this joy is inspirational. more..

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