The Black Thorn

A poem from a while ago that i posted on another site but am not useing

the black thorn

Of a black rose is poison

it sinks in to you with pleasure

its feels like you are drowining

it feels like you cant breath

but oncce your eyes close

there is no waking up

Reviews

[Mary]

nice,it is intense and i like how simple it is in a dark way.

[Ladysue]

I agree simple, yet intense. nicely done...

[Lady KrimZen]

This poem is quite simple; yet so intense in mood.
Very sharp and powerful lines.

[VioletRose]

This is a cool poem