NeverLand

The second star to the right

Can we fly away to NeverLand, my love?
A place where we never grow old!

Can we fly away to NeverLand, my dear?
A place where we'll never be cold!

Shouldn't we fly to NeverLand, my sweet?
Where I can hold you in my arms!

Shouldn't we fly to Neverland, my darling?
Where I can protect you from all harms!

Let's fly away to NeverLand, dear,
Where adults have no sway!

Let's fly away to NeverLand, babe,
Where we can have our own way!

But no, we cannot fly to NeverLand,
We cannot venture to that second star to the right.

But no, we cannot fly to NeverLand,
A life without you is my plight.

Author's Note

Captcha was "missing." Irony at its finest!

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

(sigh)...This is so sweet... if only...but a dream worth dreaming, my friend...
You have written a whimsical piece... Truly envisioned going to Neverland... You had me by the hand...~xo~:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah - don't we all want to fly away! well done, good read.

[Will]

For sure... Peter Pan was always one of my favorite childhood stories.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed!

[Rita L. Sev]

Neverland... if only! This is a great poem, Will! Good rhyme and rhythm, and as I read each line, I was there.

[Will]

Thanks a lot, Rita. I actually put some time into the rhythm here, because I kinda wanted it to sound like a lullaby. Im glad you appreciated it, and thanks for reading.