Stunner

Of course she caught my eye...

At first it was her hair,
Dyed red and bright.

Then it was her smile:
Wide and outta sight.

Next i noticed her eyes:
Dazzling and breath taking.

Then there were those breasts:
Perfectly proportioned.

Her body:
An hourglass; pristine

Her voice:
It's crisp and clean.

Then there is her humor:
Sharp and full of wit.

Her brains:
Not all there, but all of them fit.

She is a stunner,
Beauty epitomized.

Roman goddesses faun over her,
Italian beauty crystallized.

Author's Note

These creative bursts never come during normal human being hours, do they? They've always gotta hit at like 1 A.M. or some other ungodly hour... Cmon now.

Reviews

[Angi]

This must be some girl! I am hoping the writer has seen fit to tell her!

[Will]

The writer wishes he could grow a pair. Alas, things will come naturally.

[Andie]

Haha. What a flattering poem this is, Will. Well, If it's even about any one. :p lol
I have to say that "Her brains:
Not all there, but all of them fit." Is my favorite line. Haha
Very nice. :)

[Will]

Haha it is about someone, whether or not she'll ever see it is something different entirely :3
read moreHaha it is about someone, whether or not she'll ever see it is something different entirely :3
I'm glad you liked it :)

[Andie]

Dawwww.
You should tell her! :3

[Will]

If it were that easy, I would. T

[Andie]

I'll do it for you. Hahaha. X)

[Will]

Oh dear God. That would be interesting to say the least lol XD

[Andie]

It would be fun!!I'd be sure to tell her about your deep, burning, passionate love. XDD

[Will]

Lmao XD fun is another word I suppose.

[Andie]

In my world XD

[Will]

We live in very different worlds lol

[Andie]

Haha! I guess that's true. :3