361

361

A Poem by Will

There is a place
built from stones of brown.
Its steps are magical;
tall but welcoming.
Its innards are full of wonders
I've never before seen.
Mystical music finds the ear
and glorious smells land upon the nose.
The inhabitants are kind and quaint,
while perfectly far from perfect.
The best part of this crazy place
is that it houses you.

© 2014 Will


Author's Note

Will
I am back at last! I missed you all. Please send me read requests and I will answer them with as much diligence as possible. I'll be posting a bunch of stuff I've written during my absence from here in the next day or so.

This was written on August 9th

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What a lovely place I'd like to go visit. I am curious about the title. 361...number of house? Number of steps? Name of the person? Why 3-6-1? Very intriguing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will

9 Years Ago

Astute questioning. House number ;)
I love this! And i am also in love with the line "while perfectly far from perfect" I think it is a great way to capture life, it made me smile :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


while perfectly far from perfect...

Love this line! All the best, most real places, and people, in our lives are exactly this - "perfectly far from perfect".

Posted 9 Years Ago



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