Forbidden Love

A love lost

  Forbidden Love

                             A Teardrop mist on an Autumn Moon

                                     A stolen kiss gone to soon

                                 A sweet caress that longs to last

                           Leaves memories dear of a time that’s past

Will Neill.

Author's Note

poetry is not my usual style, but this jumped into my head so here it is for what it's worth. An old post revamped
Will

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Beautifully written Will...gorgeous...Rose:)

[Will Neill]

Rose, I am humbled you are taking the time to read my work, I will enjoy reading many more of yours as I visit.
take care
Will

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your poetry is what I first read...the poem about your sister, Kate. I think poetry speaks a lot about the poet, if its written well.

Keep them coming, Will!

[Will Neill]

Kelly, I in myself do not claim to be a poet and I can not expect to be as talented as yourself, however I just let the words come as they do.Thank you.
Will

[ron]

Very nice. You put a lot in those four lines. I liked it a lot.

[Will Neill]

Thanks Ron.
Will

[Cassie]

Loved the rhyme, its short yet so nicely penned.

[Will Neill]

Thank you Cassie (what a lovely name) for your comment.
Will

[Rogue]

You painted an extremely visual and concise story in just four lines of well scripted rhyme.

Lovely, Will. :)

[Diane Lockard]

Says a lot in a few words, it is wonderful when words just seem to fall in place...

Diane

[Will Neill]

Thanks a lot Diane.
Will

[NotNobody]

I'm used to your stories by now. I like this a lot but can't help imagining a story behind it and I got to tell you, oh what a story it is.

[Will Neill]

thanks for reading all my work.
Will

[Shane Winchester]

A fine piece of work Will. Perhaps you should try your hand at it more often?

[Will Neill]

Thanks Shane, If more pops into my head then maybe, other wise I will leave to you guys.
Will

[Frieda P]

Lots of emotion packed into those few lines...you said it well.

[Will Neill]

Thank you so much Frieda.
Will

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Will, I enjoyed it.