'Pumpkin Head'

A short poem for the halloween season. Its just a bit of fun.Nothing serious.

' Pumpkin Head'

I like to kiss you when you sleep

I like to take little things to keep

An earring,sock or snip of hair

You'll never know just when and where

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I like to move things that’s how I play

I come alive when you're away

I'll breathe your name when you sit alone

And stand behind when you're on the phone

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I'll touch your hair when I feel brave

cos, I'm the one who walks across your grave

So do you know who's in your head

I'm the monster who lives under the bed

Copyright © Will Neill, 2013

'A little poem for Halloween-------Will Neill

Author's Note

A short poem for the Halloween season

Reviews

[matrixmark]

This was a reallycool little piece. It reminded me in a funny way of the character out of trick r treat.
Creepy, cool and eyecatching.

Mark

[Woody]

a delightful read Will. my type of writing?
I wish we celebrated halloween. it looks so much fun in movies.

[Will Neill]

Im reading under the radar tonight, glad you enjoyed this silly little poem, thanks
Will

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Nicely done, the stealth of a thief of night that lingers to engage the senses! well done, good read.

[Will Neill]

Thanks Thomas-it was just a piece of seasonal nonsense.
Will

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome.

[Will Neill]

Chris, Thanks man-missed that one it shoud be 'You're'
Will

[Chris]

stanza 2 - two your or you're?

a "cute" flow.

[prince]

Wow. A real artist have limitless thinking. And you proved it. Nice ryme. Loved a lot reading

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[Relic]

Haha, so you're the one that took all that hair off my head huh. There's nothing like a little fun in poetry and I enjoyed this. Good one will.

[Will Neill]

relic,Thanks for the review.
Will

[Rita L. Sev]

Creepy, and a lot of fun, Will! I have always wondered about that thing under my bed... :)

[smurfett]

Very fun poet. Lots of paranormal imagery running through my mind as I read it!! Very Cool for the season!!

[Will Neill]

Smurfet. Thank you for taking the time to read.
Take Care.
Will

[Renée]

lol well...glad to know your not serious giggling...what creepy little thoughts you transformed into a delightful Halloween poem ! Well Done WIll !

[Will Neill]

Renne,thank you I am so glad you liked it. It was just some fun.
Will

[Renée]

When it is fun to read..I can tell you had fun writing it... always a pleasure ( :