Holidays

This is a poem about winter holidays.

Holidays

Snow

Presents

Dreidels

Dancing

Music

Drums

Candles

Baby Jesus

Mary and Joseph

Trees

Shopping

Snow bells

Sleigh rides

Kinaras

Snowmen

Reindeer

Menorahs

Wreaths

Santa Clause

Kaftans

Mistletoe

Colored lights

Chocolate gelt

Singing carols

Stockings on fireplaces

Dashikis

Wishes

Family

Laughter

Happiness

Smiles

The feel of excitement

Christmas

Kwanzaa

Hanukkah

Happy Holidays

Author's Note

Suggestions and tips please!

Reviews

[Phillitup]

Okay, I'm just letting you know a couple things.
1) People spell Hanukkah differently. Seriously, there are so many ways to spell it. Some start with C's, etc. If someone who celebrates that particular holiday reviews this poem, I just want you to be informed.
2) I like how you blended all the holidays to represent that in the holiday season, no matter what you celebrate, we must stand united as a community.
3) When you talk about excitement, I'm not sure if you want to say "the feeling of excitement" instead of "the feel of excitement". It works either way but some people won't prefer the fact that it's not entirely "stable".
4) This poem was great! I loved it, truly!
Nicely and eloquently penned!
Best regards,
Dell

[Savior of Time]

Thanks, I didn't know how to spell Hanakkuh. Thanks for the review, and you know I'm not good with that kind of things (with the feeling of excitement). I'm still getting better because I'm not that great. Anyway, thanks!

[Phillitup]

Your amazing....trust. I review lots of writing but I always look because I want to read yours.