Loop Hole from Time

Loop Hole from Time

A Poem by FlatLineBeauty

I am lost in life

All tomorrows measured by a clock

Since the beginning of our journey

Tick, Tock

The rhythm of the clock

Lulling most into a dreamless fog

Precious time...

Sometimes a cruel fate

Madness replying after a great deal of anguish


Sometimes still and quiet

The loop hole in time

Causing the clocks to die

With no sympathy for time lost

© 2017 FlatLineBeauty

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I struggled with this... trying to work out the significance of the analogy of the loophole in relation to time. Is it talking about time standing still for some reason? or lost time? or time that goes nowhere? I'd love to know what was really on your mind.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Chew on it a little ;) xo FLB

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Added on May 16, 2017
Last Updated on May 16, 2017