The Trip

I watched your face melt. 

All that was left were your eyes, 
ice-blue, 

   full of truth, 

        and wise... 

Compassion has no pity for the Prize.

Reviews

[Kay]

This gives an interesting image in only 2 sentences. Without you even referencing the different face features, I imagined them all falling away and two bright, deep eyes glowing as they hang in the air.