I Lost You

Not one of my better ones

I can't believe its true,
I really lost you.

I hate to think we're through
My heart can't bear it,
But I still lost you.

Our bad times were mighty few,
almost none at all,
But I still lost you.

I remember a time or two
When we had a blast,
But I still lost you.

I see the world anew
And life goes on,
But I still lost you.

I just don't have a clue
Why I lost you.

 

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

My heart was already ripped to shreds by my recent break up, but this just ripped it up even more! This piece touched my heart, bc I can relate to it. I know the feelings in this piece, I still feel that way too. This is a really good write, Idc if you think it sucks, it is going in my favorites.
~An Angel That Brings The Sweetest Of Dreams

[MNeilsen]

This one ripped at my heart. I haven't really been into poetry. Funny as that is what I have started writing. It has to make me feel something and boy does this. We all go through this at one time another and obviously you have felt this pain.

[Lover Forever]

I really like this! its just like what happened to me recently. I love it, it shows what pain you go through when you loose someone or something. Its really good! =) good job!

[Ethan Paz]

Decent just nothing spectacular. You have your good days of writing and your bad days. For me what helps is I sing and I usually write a good song/poem God-willingly.