Wolf to the Moon

Wolf to the Moon

A Poem by Wolfwind
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A Wolfinism by Wolfwind

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Wolf to the Moon - (A Wolfinism)

Hope is a fountain that springs from a mountain
The spirit comprises its core
It's breath is of rainbows, angels and stars
It's music we adore
Never fear of what the future may hold
The joy shall show you the way
With rhymes and love and friendship close
Let us live on and play


© 2013 Wolfwind



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Very beautiful! Though there are a couple possible grammatical errors that I'm not sure if you noticed -- "the spirit comprises it's core" should be "its core", and then "Its music we adore" should be "It's". Just trying to be helpful since I wish people would be more helpful when reviewing my poetry! I love the flow and rhyme you have here. (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading and catching those little typos. Grammar would be a much nicer place for me .. read more
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Encouraging poem with a melodic quality that stirs and compels us to keep moving forward....Wonderful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thanks! =D It was one of my off the cuff random pieces that came about when I left a comment for a f.. read more
Simple short and lovely I like this one too ^.^ You have quite the knack for writing

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Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the compliment! =)
can relate to this great poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank You!
This has a very sweet lyrical note to it...very beautiful and uplifting:)

Lisa

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Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind comment! =)
Lisa Victoria

4 Years Ago

You're welcome...your writing is very beautiful:)
I enjoyed this write, it's an amazing short write you made. This write seemed as a preview of a Book. It's well writtten. Amazing write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! =)
Very beautiful! Though there are a couple possible grammatical errors that I'm not sure if you noticed -- "the spirit comprises it's core" should be "its core", and then "Its music we adore" should be "It's". Just trying to be helpful since I wish people would be more helpful when reviewing my poetry! I love the flow and rhyme you have here. (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading and catching those little typos. Grammar would be a much nicer place for me .. read more
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Love the gentle lilt of this - how the words lift me and spill off my tongue in their own verbal dance. Beautifully penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Many thankss for your kind words Tammy! Some times those off the moment verses come out far better t.. read more
Nicely crafted rhyme...enjoyed this one...bob

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Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)
elegant.............................

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
Mind=blown
i love how it rhymes and it flows amazingly :)

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Wolfwind

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)
Evangeline Wren Cassae

4 Years Ago

i didn't enjoy it
i LOVED it

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Wolfwind
Wolfwind

Coupeville, WA



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