Wolf to the Moon

A Wolfinism by Wolfwind

Wolf to the Moon - (A Wolfinism)

Hope is a fountain that springs from a mountain

The spirit comprises its core

It's breath is of rainbows, angels and stars

It's music we adore

Never fear of what the future may hold

The joy shall show you the way

With rhymes and love and friendship close

Let us live on and play

Reviews

[Britt Foster]

Very beautiful! Though there are a couple possible grammatical errors that I'm not sure if you noticed -- "the spirit comprises it's core" should be "its core", and then "Its music we adore" should be "It's". Just trying to be helpful since I wish people would be more helpful when reviewing my poetry! I love the flow and rhyme you have here. (:

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks for reading and catching those little typos. Grammar would be a much nicer place for me if it would just do away with possessions...lol

[lessa (kenzie)]

Simply amazing write here

[Easterlily]

Encouraging poem with a melodic quality that stirs and compels us to keep moving forward....Wonderful!

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! =D It was one of my off the cuff random pieces that came about when I left a comment for a friend and then it just blossomed into this. I appreciate you stopping by!

[Lissianna]

Simple short and lovely I like this one too ^.^ You have quite the knack for writing

[Wolfwind]

Thank you for the compliment! =)

[Birdman313]

can relate to this great poem

[Wolfwind]

Thank You!

[Lisa Victoria]

This has a very sweet lyrical note to it...very beautiful and uplifting:)

Lisa

[Wolfwind]

Thanks for the kind comment! =)

[Lisa Victoria]

You're welcome...your writing is very beautiful:)

[Horizons]

I enjoyed this write, it's an amazing short write you made. This write seemed as a preview of a Book. It's well writtten. Amazing write.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you for your kind words! =)

[TL Boehm]

Love the gentle lilt of this - how the words lift me and spill off my tongue in their own verbal dance. Beautifully penned.

[Wolfwind]

Many thankss for your kind words Tammy! Some times those off the moment verses come out far better than those that I try to concentrate on! I'm always appreciative of your time to come and read my ink! =)

[bobc]

Nicely crafted rhyme...enjoyed this one...bob

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

[Karl Woof Junior]

elegant.............................

[Wolfwind]

Thank you.