That great chill

It had been a moment

Oh so sweet of a time to drink

A heightened feeling cascading over the soul

Like a waterfalls healing rain

That place was home.

Long ago, in times foot prints

So close, yet far away

Ghost like memories swirling and drifting

Within the foggy valleys Northern chill

Entombed by those trees, tall and wide.

The echoes of distant howls

Resonating across mountain tops

Sinking within the damp fallen grounds

Thoughts of a journey linger.

 

So different, new and beautiful

Warmed with the spirit of summer sun

Ever radiating a healing gift

Across a timeless expanse

That place was home.

Many steps upon those ancient sands

Bringing time to be a priceless jewel, a blessing

Now vanished on whim of a sudden storm

Wandering, roaming, to somewhere not known.

Slow steps, heavy fur, dampness permeates

Wondering, roving, eyes upon shadowy shapes

Echoes fading in the wind, silence to grip

A lone wolf’s howl.

 

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

I can almost, well..I can feel the winds strength and movement. The dampness as he presses on. See the way fur becomes heavy and its eyes are ever searching for the shadow that can injure, hurt, or become the prey. This is a stunning poem. I know of somebody who has a first love of the wolf. Always her first love. She hides it now, but whenever she see's one she is taken away by its beauty and mystery sorrounding it. I will send her this one and I know she will love your love of the animal. Great poem as well. Lots of emotion and passion. :)

[MiyaAron]

Okay, this one i just as amazing. I have never really thought of the "spirit of the summer sun." I love when I can sit back and go wow.
Honestly the words are captivating, its the execution that has left me breathless.
~Wow~

[Hoosier Belle]

Such a sad write.

[daydreamer]

very good write. all the emotions are well blended good write

[Tina Kline]

Sadness of loss and change not longed for. There's a deep sadness all the way through. The images in this are spectacular, I love them. Love the whole poem.

[Bridget Murphy]

Amazing! "Echoes fading in the wind" I love that line! So much sadness, and strength.