Distant Memory

The distance that used to separate 

Your existence from mine

Became a very thin line

When our hearts decided to intertwine

When we set foot on cloud nine

The distance between us somehow

Became nothing but a distant memory now

Reviews

[Saoirse K.]

i like this
short, concise, descriptive
great wordplay
especially liked this line,
"When we set foot on cloud nine"
a wonderful little ode to the
narrowing of the distance between two
whose fate it was to be together
nice write