End Of A Chapter

For a while we shared a narrative

Most times it was positive

But upon further analysis

We were in different stages

I wanted it to stay the same

Wasn't ready for the changes

I was still in the middle

Flipping through the pages

Curious about upcoming phrases

I was still reading our chapter

Finishing for me didn't matter

But you already closed the book 

Deep down I knew it had to end

But I realize now looking back after

Although we both enjoyed our story

I guess you just read it faster

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

Wow! You depict such simple concept on a universal scale. You write with simplicity such complex themes! I love your poetic perspective on life.

You have a soulful way of writing; and this is felt in your way of rhyming with a certain natural rhythm and flow. Yet you don't rhyme just for the sake of rhyming; for your poems are packed with meaning, awareness, celebration, beauty, love, compassion, passion and truth.

You seemingly have a passion for the beauty of words, and you have a grasp of the poetic craft. You are aware of the natural equilibrium of letting the right word paint the right image unforced, applying the poetic devices at your disposal, though whilst staying true to concept, context and content, all in sync in the overall poem, from the title to the total execution of the concept.

Well done!