Verses for The Meditating Lord

 

Upon the mountains serene,

Blue skies lay infinitely above,

Opening the grand beauty of creation

Infinite to the eyes mortal…

 

It is in this serenity

A representation of vast infinity,

Within Earth

Resides the very Lord of Evolution…

 

Camphor white in color,

Ashen is His body divine,

Motionless and focused

An art perfectly still

In Another world in Earth,

All white and blue

The very core being is everywhere found…

 

In the meditative state,

The eyes keep serenity

Never open

Never closed…

 

Through Him every end has a beginning,

And what is perceived as evil,

Might have been a good all along…

 

The difference in indifference,

Destruction for creation,

There is universality in contradiction,

The very core of omnipotence,

All encompassing…

 

As He is in us,

We are in Him,

And have always been…

 

In His serene meditative state,

Motionless,

He holds control

From His reptilian necklace,

To the very universe

The astral planes,

Following the synchrony

Created by His dance…

 

 

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

Dude beautyous because it moves like a helix spiral, (no relation) yet the lines dont meet and yet they do, they spin and sentences you leave off catch upon the next rotation and click together, and because you write of an archetype the edges cut off of ideas you describe finish flush in the readers mind and make this ONE you describe divine. To each of us, though I can tell he's a specific in your own mind.

Dr Seus moment

[alternative_be]

The first time I read this poem, I did not know what to write, I only felt ... a connection between God and the World ... Now I have this song in my head: 'What if God was one of us?' He would love this poem because indeed He is in us and we are in Him ...
Though often he is being mistreated by those who's visions are impaired and are convinced to act in the name of God, not realizing that they are harming others that are also harbouring Him!

[Dani California]

This is fantastic! It's especially significant to me as I am going through some deep spiritual changes.. stepping outside of the box a bit... ok a lot! lol..... and this, is right up my spiritual alley!

Yes, God resides within..
God is us....

So hard for many to grasp. Now I'm venturing into debatable theory and whatnot, so I will quickly end this by saying....

Brilliant work!! :)

[Tomás Ó C..]

A nice tribute to God.

[Jenny Davis]

This is truly a feast for the spirit...this is so unworn. I agree with you, HE is all these things and more...
A bright, bright job here ;)

[Justin Tobey]

Beatiful. The poem created a very serene, peaceful atmosphere which was lovely to feel. You did a wonderful job! : )

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

i love the poem greatly. im not much for religion or lords or anything like that, but when you put the words to it my mind whent silent and all i could hear were the words i was speakin in my mind. great poem. i guess u can consider me a fan of your work. :D

[Emily B]

I love this! My very favorite of your works I've read. Uplifting, enchanting and meditative you have drawn your images beautifully.

[Ralphy]

Seems as if I just walked into this again. You know...your imagination just blows me away. How you take and drive me with these writings that unfold many possible meanings. Great write...From His reptilian necklace...I like that line.

[robin]

Yes I love this, live this. I enjoy these works of yours equally for the comments they inspire in others. You could be slightly more choosy in the juxtaposition of some of the great themes in this work. As others have alluded it contains several identities, and some of the metaphors get lost within the stanzas as our minds take off. "In his serene meditative state, motionless, Holds control" I found to be difficult grammar, it pulls me out of the beautiful illusion. Perhaps more literal, "He holds control"? (for example).

[Wildfleour]

As he is in us,

We are in him,

And have always been�

These lines remind me of one of my favorite love poems by Rumi. I wrote about about a similar idea - two lovers realizing that they were within one another all along, so to speak.

A lovely write, Haresh.