This Day

This Day

A Poem by
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Trying to break a block...

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Sunrays slice effortlessly the winter clouds

Golden rods of warmth illuminate the horizon

Silhouettes take flight, bringing life to the gray


Dark hills in the distance pale to misty blue

Rising brings amber warmth and anticipation

Mist slowly fades, vibrant color replaces


Lush green grass, freckles of red and yellow

Chirping and whistling songs compete for attention

Sharp blues, reds and yellow burst from lush green trees

Life dances in chaos surrounding you


Stepping out, first morning light kisses you

Sleep’s cool blanket washes away

Sparrow song sounds encouragement

What good will come this day!

© 2011


Author's Note

Pushing through writers block. No beer or anything, keeping it 'clean' Any suggestions are welcome.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is beautiful! I just love the way you did it! I also love the way you are keeping it "clean" I'm not a beer, or things like that person.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this poem is so nice. it kind of gives me the warm and fuzzies. i wish i could work this well under the influence of writers block.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love, love, love this poem!!! So refreshing!!! My favorite verse is the last verse with its "Sleep's cool blanket" n' the sparrow songs! This is so GREAT!!! ㋡

Posted 12 Years Ago


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writer's block can be a nightmare - you're pushing through it well here - very uplifting and optimistic - the signs of a good day even - the birds and light - nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Extremely inspirational, this made me smile........:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


No suggestions...I don't like editing someone's work unless it's an error that severely hinders the poem. I like it. I like the descriptions because I feel like I'm looking at a painting and can see what you describe. Love the first two sentences of the last stanza.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 17, 2011
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