Fly Away

Fly Away

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Sometimes I feel caged in ... in my body, my everyday life ... but I'm so afraid to change anything, for if things went wrong I will have to face the consequences.

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I need to break free

From the chains

From the misery

Come wings let me fly away

From the sadness of everyday

It won’t bother me

To change

To let things be

Come wings let me fly away

From the sadness of everyday

 

I won’t forget you

The pain

What you do

I’ll keep loving you

All the time

I’ll be true

But will you remember

How tender

I was

Or will you forget

Never regret

What was

Come wings let me fly away

From the sadness of everyday

© 2010


Author's Note

Be gentle, and please remember my mother language is not English like all of you guys :)

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I thought this was well done.
Very heartfelt, overall a touching
piece.

جميلة ونقية

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks a lot for the tip :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I think this is completely amazinh. I like how you write your feelings out. This is simply amazing. I like how you ended this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like it because you can totally tell you have been there and it is real! If you want more vocabulary in english go to dictionary.com. they have a thesaurus in it just in case you have a word for it but need one that amplifies your feelings more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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