Lost In A Moment

Lost In A Moment

A Poem by
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My favorite dream

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So quiet.

All you can hear is the soft sound of the rain hitting the ground and your heart beat.

Two of my favorite sounds.

The smell of the cool rain and crisp wet grass.

Your arms holding me close.

My head pressed against your chest.

Swaying back and forth we danced in the rain.

So close we are like one person.

Almost too dark to see anything.

Only the moon shines down on us like our spot light.

The faint light makes your eyes sparkle.

The feeling of water running down our skin.

Lost in a moment that is so perfect I never want it to end.

Never wanting to wake up from this dream.

With your arms wrapped around me I could stand here for eternity and more.

It gets colder and I can see your sweet breath.

I could be lost in my dream forever.

As long as it means I could be in your protective arms just a few minutes more.

You look at me.

You don’t want this moment to end either.

I wake up.

You are holding me close.

Your chest slowly moving up and down.

You lay there unknowing of my secret memory of you.

© 2010


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Cute, it was creative, it paints and beautiful picture of love, great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this and the picture is beautiful!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very smooth and sweet too........i like your creative use of words and the romantic style of this one. Nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this poem its so natural and the feelings in it are so realistic and raw I would find it difficult to NOT relate to this poem even if someone had never experienced feelings like this. I believe you did a very good job. Only problem that I found was "I gets colder and I can see your sweet breath." 'Gets' should be just get. Other then that I really enjoyed this poem and I thank you for reading and reviewing my poetry as well. I would love to hear from you again. Happy Writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really love the very last line "you lay there unknowing of my secret memory of you"
This poem makes me smile, and at the end... I was just saying wow. Good Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
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