Rock and Sea

Rock and Sea

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Crash against me, I will not erode


from intense heat and crushing pressure 


I was formed 


and I will stand the test of time


for you, all for you.


Your rain falls down on me


torrential, acidic, cutting shards of hale


I remain whole, intact, unmoving


for you, all for you.


The earth moves, tsunami waves engulf me


from the core new expansion, contraction 


evolution in molten lava


cooled in your embrace, made solid, unbreakable


for you, all for you.


The gravity of the moon, creating the tides


rushing in, to wash you up on the shore


pulling out, dragging you back to the depths


Submerge me, expose me


cling to me, I remain unchanged


for you, all for you.


When you are still, placid, serene


wrapped around me, gently lapping against me


you sparkle in the sun, and in the moonlight


I see my love for you reflected back at me


for me, all for me.

© 2011


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so tender and emotional..
loved how you picture yourself made solid and strong as a rock to take all his shocks
to stand his rains and not get wet ,no to dry him up,and pull him back on feet
all for him,as the waves tossed him to your shores you will take what remains
and rebuild to be strong ,and when that is..and in your arms now its your turn
to lean on much tenderness ,and embrace all the kindness,now all doing for you
lovely thoughts so poetic ,loved the idea
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was fantastic! Incredibe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so tender and emotional..
loved how you picture yourself made solid and strong as a rock to take all his shocks
to stand his rains and not get wet ,no to dry him up,and pull him back on feet
all for him,as the waves tossed him to your shores you will take what remains
and rebuild to be strong ,and when that is..and in your arms now its your turn
to lean on much tenderness ,and embrace all the kindness,now all doing for you
lovely thoughts so poetic ,loved the idea
lovely write..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Submerge me, expose me cling to me, I remain unchanged for you, all for you.

I love the rythym of that line. Beautiful.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful photo and words. I like the emotion and feel of this poem. When we are the rock for another. Amazing things can happen. Take two strong people to stand strong together. I like the language and the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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