April fool

Unfair is what I call it when she, 

Gets so much more than me. 

$50.00 for her birthday in a card for her, 

So I took it and hid it, thats for sure. 

Up, down, to the side of,  

She even looked over and above. 

She walked in a puddle with a sad heart, 

Not very wise or smart. 

For if she had looked under her shoe she would have found, 

A taped fifty dollar bill and pounded me to the ground. 

But too bad for her I got a good laugh, 

as she ruined her present on a wet, wet path. 

Mom just looked at me in awe, 

As I told her this with her wide open jaw. 

I looked down on the ground then looked and said don't fear, 

Happy April fools day mom, and don't believe everything you hear!!! 

Reviews

[Metaphysical Journey]

Super surprizing problem resulution. This is a cute story poem. Its got real possibility. Needs just a little work on filler words and phases. In general quite good.