To Live Before I Die

I know what i am doing,

I know I'm unprepared,

but for some strange reason.

I'm not really scared.

Maybe this is growing older,

maybe I'll regret,

but for tonight i think i realize.

I really just want to forget.

Let me have my peace,

one night at a time.

Let me fall apart,

and grow darker deep inside.

I need to live a life,

before i can die.

Reviews

[Fearless Sunshine]

very emotional and put just into the right words. beautiful :)

[☯]

Very emotionally written. The pleading made it fit greatly. I loved reading this. Nice job, and well written. It flows perfectly :) Spoken to everyone, and what we sometimes when we live in chaos 24/7. Great job! :)

[A.D. Wilson]

I think this advice applies to teenagers as well as adults. People can smother you with advice, but sometimes, you have to do things on your own in order to learn. Wonderful!

[Dai Edenburough]

Said just right for all teens!

[Lily Mae]

Perfectly said. :) x

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Yes! I loved it!