No Words, Just You.

You .... You........... You.

For the first time in years

I see your face

And it takes me back to that special place

Where we acted a fool, but boy we felt cool

And I remember what it was like

To fall in love

With a girl like you, hearts so alike

 

For the first time since the day we met

I remember how it feels to connect

On the deepest of levels,

Dancin’ under your roof

To the mic and treble

If there was love, we were proof

We could feel the lust, and your feelings rust

As mine only grow, I wonder if you know

Or if you knew how much

I was in love with you

 

I remember how for the first time since

I know how to climb this fence

Stand on tip toes

Explore new places that God only knows

Run head on into the beyond

With arms spread out to fly

I can feel the time pass by

Like the wind wiping tears from my eyes

But I didn’t care cuz you were there

And I didn’t breathe in oxygen I didn’t need

I had you so I was free

 

For the first time since I fell in love

With the girl who always changed so much

Afraid to be in touch with who she was

I only wish we didn’t drift

Into open sea without a hand to lift

My sorrows away into open space

Id close my eyes and rewind to that date

You were the only person I wanted to kiss

I never expected to feel quite like this

You lead the way through the dark

You picked up a match and struck up a spark

You made me brave enough to venture through

And that’s how I fell in love with you

 

No boy could ever take your spot

In my heart reserved for you but youre not

Aware of how you skinned me bare

Left me lying there

I cant bear to think

Of how you left me on the brink

Of the insanity you introduced

You are the final knot in my noose

 

I want that feeling back

Cuz for the first time since

Before we lost track

I swore you wanted me

Like a blind man who could see

Within that monster was true beauty

No one could take that away

If only you would come back to stay

And whisper what I need to hear you say

You never once ceased to amaze

I remember when i met your gaze

 

There are no words

That could ever sum up

Just how much this hurts

You were more than just a friend to me

But to you that was all we would ever be

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

this was beautiful and the flow of emotions was just...wow great imagery I liked it

[al25]

I love how real your emotions are. I just like how i feel that you are just going through these memories in your head and your writing them down as they come. Great write :)

[Bailey C. Writing]

Goodness :o
This was beautiful, you really expressed true love in a poetic, gorgeous way here. The rhyme scheme was good and flowed well, and I got imagery from even the short lines :) Excellent job

[solo2be]

Great write, I like the way this poem flowed.

[snopadelic]

That was really good. Althought i know nothng about peotryy. I could emphasis with the feelings that was brought out in the words. The fear, insecurity, all knowing of youth and the dissapointment of life. I really liked it

[shoaib]

awesome work !

[BeccaB]

this is beautiful i love the flow of this poem and it is so meaning full and captivating... it braught me to tears... it has a simple comnsept but you have writen in such detail that it made it into a piece of art work well done ^_^