~ Like Mountains and Streams

~ Like Mountains and Streams

A Poem by
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E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, the Love for Nature

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~ Like Mountains and Streams

 

 

 

 

Where does love grow?

On top? where I breathe thin air

And where days will turn into light

For I will be there

 

O' great lover of yester years

What of you shall become?

If time of years dances

On your rough edges

And peace always will deform

 

Icy foam sloshing against

The sharp forms of your vast corpo

Cut shapes by centuries

Still it hurts from ages ago

 

So fresh you are onto knees high in;

The voice of the golden glacier stream

Crossing you slowly, passing you by

Where each era I sing to you

A tiny lovers scream

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 



© 2013



Author's Note



This is a poem I made when I was off for a long time,
Far away from home.... and I was hiking, and got inspiration...
I hope you enjoy!




Thank you xx

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Amazing, truly inspired by your love of nature and of the ancients. The ancients whisper to us the secrets, the hidden treasures, through nature for those who are awake and ready to receive. As we are more and more aware of what is happening in our lives, we are shaped, our rough edges polished, our dreams molded into what they were always meant to be. This is where love grows, in the awareness, in the processes of truly living of becoming, this is what becomes of the great lover of yester years. Truly inspiring, you once again have touched my heart so deeply, blessings to you sweet heart.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this lovely review :-)
Healing Star

4 Years Ago

you are most deserving :)

4 Years Ago

Xxx



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The voices of nature will call. Maybe not from your lazy -boy but as you make the last reach of the bend of fight the heat to finch the fench line. The last mile of your 10 mile run your mind can be the most clear and ready to receive. I got my boots ready lets go.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I came away with a calming feeling having read this, bliss

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Great it could give you bliss hun! I come back for more of yours, in spare time, I'm so grateful to .. read more
Seems like you missed someone or maybe just home sick. That is palpable here and the imagery is like always freaking great!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you Inda.... This was also an observation, and I release you the magick from the poem, I was h.. read more
Inda

4 Years Ago

My pleasure.
This echos of lost love complex by nature. The universes strings are all connected in some way and therefore nature connected to human emotions. Love the visuals in this piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

I am grateful you're here PB, and you saw the visuals..... thank you dearly X
Poetic Beauty

4 Years Ago

your are welcome. It is stunning in beauty of the minds eye
I really enjoyed this. Enrapturing imagery if I've ever heard, and it sounds so lovely to the ears.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend. It was pure observation, whilst traveling.... :) glad you were here, and shar.. read more
Amazing, truly inspired by your love of nature and of the ancients. The ancients whisper to us the secrets, the hidden treasures, through nature for those who are awake and ready to receive. As we are more and more aware of what is happening in our lives, we are shaped, our rough edges polished, our dreams molded into what they were always meant to be. This is where love grows, in the awareness, in the processes of truly living of becoming, this is what becomes of the great lover of yester years. Truly inspiring, you once again have touched my heart so deeply, blessings to you sweet heart.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thanks for this lovely review :-)
Healing Star

4 Years Ago

you are most deserving :)

4 Years Ago

Xxx
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Pax
Where does love grow? ~ well love grow anywhere as you go everywhere... you painted the whole scenery very beautiful and full of love in the air everywere... Nature really inspires us in such manner that reflects the beauty around us in our writes... Simply beautiful dearest friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you dearest :) always nice if you are here.
Excellent is the only word that describes this poem:-):-):-D.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Dear friend, forgive me as I'm not that fast as many on here, I will return the favour, I won't forg.. read more
Lonely Islander

4 Years Ago

Haha lol its ok... I reviewed your stuff because i really enjoyed reading them..but that does not me.. read more

4 Years Ago

It does mean... :-) I'm just not so fast as others here, with English, as it's not my first language.. read more
We climb the highest peaks willing to do anything for love. To find it. To see it. To see it. To taste it.
Failing, we descend down the path of life. All of it catching on the slopes around us. Condensing and gathering. Then we find ourselves in the valley wading thru the streams of our lost and found crying up to the mountain... As we walk past the streams that hold all of our questions and answers to cool the aching heart. My take...
You made me go all poetic EL...
Loved the write. Love the mountains and bath in the streams.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear David, my friend, you're sheer brilliance yourself! so glad you enjoyed the m.. read more
I've spent some time looking at glaciers and their work, but I haven't ever, until reading your poem, thought about the slow work of love on our own human landscape, so much like the grinding down that is possible, and the revelations made so much like the work of those mile-deep ices.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

YESSSS someone who felt the metaphor :) thank you Frank!

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