~ The Land of Her

~ The Land of Her

A Poem by
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E.L. Fantasy, Elisa Laura, Surreal Tea Cup, Cup of Tea, The Land of Her, Sleeping

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~ The Land of Her

 

Let her sleep in beauty’s landscape

Do not ever wake her up

Leave the little birdies singing

For she is dreaming in her cup

 

Let the trees play with all fresh air,

And  let the climate change

Let every season but to come

And accept this isn’t strange

 

Do never touch her sensitive skin

Before she will be awake

Dance with her thoughts while she’s asleep

That’s the beauty you should take

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 


© 2013



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Powerful write Eli, I could feel the emotion in this. So I went and read it like a few times more :) I know the path, peace and tranquillity, but the small things within that world, couldn't allow it because without the Land the small things wouldn't have a place and there would be a humongous gap. But all things knew,butterflies and ants alike, that they couldn't speak only pray... Well done Eli you wrote a fabulous poem!! :) loved the way you wrote this well done.

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3 Years Ago

Dank je wel lieffie, voor je mooie woorden ;) I'm so glad you liked this older one of me. Sleep is s.. read more
Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

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Just as is nature, this piece was beautiful. Very well crafted piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely words Christian. Very appreciated. :) Elisa.
Powerful write Eli, I could feel the emotion in this. So I went and read it like a few times more :) I know the path, peace and tranquillity, but the small things within that world, couldn't allow it because without the Land the small things wouldn't have a place and there would be a humongous gap. But all things knew,butterflies and ants alike, that they couldn't speak only pray... Well done Eli you wrote a fabulous poem!! :) loved the way you wrote this well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Dank je wel lieffie, voor je mooie woorden ;) I'm so glad you liked this older one of me. Sleep is s.. read more
Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

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What an imagery! Impeccable is the word. : )

Keep writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you for coming by sweet Saima. :) and for your words. Will check you out too.
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4 Years Ago

My pleasure. : )
Looking forward to that.

4 Years Ago

Me too :)
It can be a powerful experience to watch someone sleep. May it be a child, a lover, or an older relative. Makes us so self aware of the slightest move, or the smallest sound we make. We become the guardian, chasing away the bad dreams. As we watch quietly, we can almost share the peaceful rest... I enjoyed what you wrote here Elisa, this piece is refreshing, delicate and almost whispered... Your words are not intrusive, they are just the witness to the beauty of the sleeping creature.... Great work!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you JP for this awesome point of view, again, and your great words. I agree with all you say h.. read more
sithlordjp

4 Years Ago

:) You are quite welcome.
Wow, as if I have just read a wonderful dream. Your imagery is stunning and soft upon my eyes. Your words carry a beauty all their own. This is gorgeous.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack , for your time, and reading this little lullaby :) glad you found it gorgeou.. read more
Jack...

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome
My goodness!! You didn't even ask me, first, if you can take me to dreams and adorn a smile....... without asking!! ; ) Leave to all what passes, be the lesson of love and the life that seeds its beauty. I am not even sure how to comment on what seems like it should be published. lol I have only been writing for the better part of a year's time, and I am intrigued by you as much as I am left to my senses to pull you in with these beautiful poems of yours!! xoxo -Mark

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

That is brilliant though, I do only review too what I totally love, no read requests, and that not m.. read more
Patrick Henry

4 Years Ago

This is not for the selfish purpose of seeding your heart with words that borrow on tired emotions. .. read more

4 Years Ago

Well I've read some of yours, as I do read everyone on here, even without reviewing, I read a lot..... read more
This is fantastic!!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear Brian :)
I love this! Such a surreal read. It makes mee smile as you so easily draw me into this beautiful fairytale dream land! Oh how I've missed you my beautiful sis!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you love, I was in this mood lately lol, I have missed you too... Xxx
This should be in a little book, illustrated by Arthur Rackham. A lovely little Victorian verse.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Aw, Ken, that is coincidence, I was just reading your latest one... and felt the magic... I will con.. read more
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"let the climate change, Let every season but to come, And accept this isn’t strange" ~ i see the beauty of acceptance despite natures harsh anger or should i say weather on us... I see you dance in methaphors dearest friend... the last stanza made me really think of how deeply it was meant... a sensitive soul who flies with strong persona...very much admirable.


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4 Years Ago

Thank you very much dearest and sweetest friend. It is about how beautiful dreaming can be... someti.. read more

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