~ Ink

~ Ink

A Poem by
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~ Ink, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freestyle Poetry, me, Rehab wich can't be a Rehab, Slave of the Pen, a Poetic Junk :D

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~ Ink

 

 

Powerful thoughts arising

Surrounded by beauty of nothing

Yet can be influenced in a

Poetic peaceful space

I breathe...


Wander and flying

Thoughts past my face,

As if my mind will be jumping

With such evidence,

Out of nowhere ...

Where is the border?

 

Where you're an artist?

And where you become insane?

How close all lays within,

Those creative brains...?

 

What are the forces

Of struggle

In just a moment of rest

If the writer calls,

The pen dances,

And your heart can not

Do anything then follow...

 

I write out of myself now

Like I did earlier,

It is the ink that is dominant

Colored in red tones

Love has prevailed

The proverbial

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

© 2013


Author's Note



Just to be in my mind, is a maze....
Feel free....

Thank you xx

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Pax
First stanza:
~ ahh, I breathe in the beauty of nothing as our thoughts wonders… our life is poetic form as I perceived it…

Second stanza:
~ again our thoughts are in flight.. jumping out of nowhere… from thoughts to thoughts without borders… if I may say… the mind is a vast dimension like a two mirrors stand together you’ll see infinity all depends on how your think and feel the surroundings …

Third stanza:
~ oh, how those question manifest itself are true beauty of the mind… there is a fine line between an artist and being insane on our work… and that is balance… we can create all types of insane thoughts, words or our craft as long as we hold on into reality.. and that’s balance I think…

Fourth stanza:
~what a wonderful perception , yes at times … but then I always thought the heart dictates what it felt then the mind translate as the pen follows….

“Love has prevailed
The proverbial”
Last stanza:
~ the ink is the result of our life within our soul(when the heart and mind are one)… the love for art had succeeded….

My Dearest Friend, I love this write for its peaks so much of you and the art you are creating… Brilliant as always :)
Your friendly neighbor
w.Pax:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

You are brilliant my friend :)))
Pax

11 Years Ago

likewise ;) for your brilliant as well...lets fly high :D

11 Years Ago

Always dear.... With ink and water and oil paint lol xx :) and ecoline....



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I find myself lost in your words. This one very peaceful and I have felt this way at times. The pen does have a mind of it's own as it takes on our emotions and personalities as a sort of voyeur into our lives. This is very beautifully written and I think your words are captivating as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Coming from you means a lot dear Stacey, thank you I'm pleased with your words...
Indeed. Slavery is only necessary and attractive when it is the pen that enslaves us. Another nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

:) that made me smile, thank you dearly. I will be back for more of your writes ;D promise!
It was good

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Very Beautiful. Thanks for writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
You ink your ethereal landscape very well here-- write on!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you Makosica...
nice thoughts Elisa...yes your mind is a maze, and so are all those who can lose themselves within the emotion, the escape, the ultimate joy of writing those inner thoughts, and creation we poetically express...nice...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Gracias my friend.... yes. It is no shame :) that's why we all are here aren't we? this is just a lo.. read more
Art

11 Years Ago

my pleasure...
When you hear the leaves calling your name, when you see a butterfly flutters across the room, when you feel the pen guides your finger, a masterpeice is going to happen:) Gorgeous write, dear..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear... :) you don't know how much your words mean to me xo :)
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

And yours to me:)
Ha! When inspiration strikes, I become the slave to obey.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

You make me smile Eros, I thought I would be weird.... so good you're with me ;-) X
ErosNthanatos

11 Years Ago

If I think u r weird, I've always said about myself when I have the impulse to write.

11 Years Ago

:) makes me smile thanks for all
I like this. A journey of thoughts and poetry down a river of ink. Also the formating, was very well done. And you left us with a thought provoking finish, too. A well written piece Eli


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Honored and grateful by/to you ! thank you Diego :)
I'm not sure I can convey any better what the others have commented on this amazing piece. Ink is the heart and soul of a writer. We live it, breath it, sleep it, and dream it....WOW Ms. Elisa! I love reading the brilliance of your mind. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quill~

11 Years Ago

:)

11 Years Ago

Don't worry dear, I understood you perfectly :) *hug*
Quill~

11 Years Ago

whew...so glad! :)) *hugs back*

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