~ I’m just on my way

~ I’m just on my way

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~ I’m just on my way, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freedom, RoadDevilette, Love, Richness, Life

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~ I’m just on my way

 

 

Let me be just a tiny little woman,

All alone, nowhere and everywhere

For the road is my home,

There I shall feel safe;

 

There don’t exist any questions

How to go on further, for further

Isn’t there yet,

 

Where eternity continues…

     I shall transit

 

When time is with us, we shall be drowned

In these arms, of love,

Rest, and peace.

 

For now, I keep on moving,

Among my shield of life

 

The only steps I take are those

To be closer to there

To walk my lifetime, of minutes

 

And when I may rest,

I shall get rewarded, with the gloom

Of a noiseless little present;

 

And rest for eternity,

When time stands still for a moment

There where I donate the earth my last breath

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura


© 2013



Author's Note

A poem from May 2013
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Thank you xx


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Radios blarin' and my hearts on fire
Put a bullet through my head and then we'll call it a night.
whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh.
Stereos singin' and i'm out of luck,
another cigarette and i'll say i've enough.
and whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh
burnin' down while. i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the roadd...
riding on the back in the fear of the standards,
the standards that now we will reign,
and i'll i've gotta say is that i'm sick of this town and lets screw the standards and lets make a stand!
burnin' down while i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the road...
and i'll i know, all i know, is that i'm never lookin' back, never lookin' back again.. ohh again.
i THOUGHT i told ya... i THOUGHT i told ya! - eatmewhileimhot

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Haha, beautiful ;-) buddy... "Screw the Standard" -x- thank you thank you!



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I love the road. One day I want to roam her once again.
"For the road is my home,
There I shall feel safe;"
I enjoyed the thoughts and the want to keep moving. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

I had a feeling you did my friend... for you are such a traveler too... You've seen so much my frien.. read more
Oh, Elisa, my friend! You just blow me away with your writing, honestly!! Now I understand what you meant by the whole "road devilette" thing. This poem expresses that quite perfectly.

Somehow, this reminds me of "On The Road" by Jack Kerouac, not just because it's about that, literally, but because of the "free" vibe of it. It helps remind me of the fluidity and the eternity of true existence, in the realm of the absolute.

I think we can get so caught up in daily routines and the mundane that we forget about ultimate reality. My favorite stanza in this is where you say, "The only steps I take are those/To be closer to there/To walk my lifetime, of minutes."

Those words, to me, are extremely profound - it's as if you're speaking a universal truth, that we are always in the here and now, no matter where we may be physically. They may not have been what you meant, but there is such a wonderful wisdom in this piece, that I think it transcends even the words that are on the page.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you Eric for your wonderful review, with depth, and hights... I do like what you see in this w.. read more
Eric Pudalov

3 Years Ago

Aww...no problem. So you were literally "on your way," huh? I look forward to talking with you aga.. read more

3 Years Ago

Hey! yes, I was... lol, actually I am very often... this weekend I'm driving again far... we will ca.. read more


This is "there" all the way there....

Calm collected being gracefully moves in heavenly space...


Rossen

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you my friend... I appreciate it very much. :) and I'll come by soon.
I felt no time flowing through your poem. It feels just as eternal as the path you describe in it. Time is endless when we wonder how longer we're staying on this world.
Maybe it is better to be as little as we are, instead of comparing ourselves with the infinity of time and space.
A friend of mine once said: "The real problemas is not life beyond death, but to think that there's something else"
Well, i'm not agree, I guess somehow there is something beyond, as the energy we are in the cosmos We must transform in somerhing beyond our understanding. We shall calle it resurection, reencarnation, eternal knowledge, for you it is called the road it is tour home.
Your poemas always soothes muy heart and soul sis, even when there are things I still can't understand, I lo ve them.

Just perfect!

Fernando



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Siempre, sabemos nos tomamos nuestro tiempo, la confianza, la paciencia, y la felicidad... hermano, .. read more
Fernando Dardón

3 Years Ago

Damn...sorry for the misspellings, this tablet changes words while I'm writing -.-'

3 Years Ago

No worries ;) Conozco el idioma de tu corazón, mi querido, por lo que es realmente bueno... Sis alw.. read more
Beautiful i really connected to it and I loved it👌💛

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
This is one of those rare poems that fits like a glove the words effortless in there motion.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your wonderful comment John. Appreciated.
This was very deep and beautiful, i loved the ending to this piece.
I love the way you set out your poems and they way they are written.
Keep writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweet Cimmy, I truly appreciate it. -x-
cimmy wuv xxxooo

3 Years Ago

Oh your most welcome anytime hun :)
This is so special it is breathtaking... For some reason this makes a specail connection with me.. When you talk about the road and finding a time to rest this may not make any sence but this kinda reminds me of my grandpas house... He is no longer with us so when i left his house today i felt as if i was leaving my emotions there.. Here you are writing in my eyes about finding your peaceful place but cant find that place where you can let it all go and not feel any pain..... Trust me keep looking my love you will find it.. I may be totally wrong on why you wrote this but this is how i saw it when i read it and i must say thank you

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

3 Years Ago

I agree so do you... Just returned from a 5 day trip so i have little energy sleep will be good to m.. read more

3 Years Ago

Yes, I read you were to your aunt, and far away, please rest, be full of energy soon! Road Devilette.. read more
Lover Of Words

3 Years Ago

I spent 5 days there it was a break away from this little world that is for sure
I echo your sentiments, all we can do is keep moving forward, when the end comes then that is the end,

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you paddy d daly! appreciated :)

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