~ I’m just on my way

~ I’m just on my way, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freedom, RoadDevilette, Love, Richness, Life

~ I’m just on my way

 

 

Let me be just a tiny little woman,

All alone, nowhere and everywhere

For the road is my home,

There I shall feel safe;

 

There don’t exist any questions

How to go on further, for further

Isn’t there yet,

 

Where eternity continues…

     I shall transit

 

When time is with us, we shall be drowned

In these arms, of love,

Rest, and peace.

 

For now, I keep on moving,

Among my shield of life

 

The only steps I take are those

To be closer to there

To walk my lifetime, of minutes

 

And when I may rest,

I shall get rewarded, with the gloom

Of a noiseless little present;

 

And rest for eternity,

When time stands still for a moment

There where I donate the earth my last breath

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

A poem from May 2013
Feel free...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Radios blarin' and my hearts on fire
Put a bullet through my head and then we'll call it a night.
whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh.
Stereos singin' and i'm out of luck,
another cigarette and i'll say i've enough.
and whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh
burnin' down while. i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the roadd...
riding on the back in the fear of the standards,
the standards that now we will reign,
and i'll i've gotta say is that i'm sick of this town and lets screw the standards and lets make a stand!
burnin' down while i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the road...
and i'll i know, all i know, is that i'm never lookin' back, never lookin' back again.. ohh again.
i THOUGHT i told ya... i THOUGHT i told ya! - eatmewhileimhot

Haha, beautiful ;-) buddy... "Screw the Standard" -x- thank you thank you!

[Horizon K.]

this is me too dear sis... I used to be able to plan my future but now... I am this tiny woman, just following the path immediately in front of me, wherever it may lead, and hoping for that feeling to arise, that recognition of familiarity that says, meant to be... this path from here, to wherever eternity may be... love this!!!!

Thank you so much for your thoughts sweet sister! you are so appreciated!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Life is a journey. We are taking the road of our own...sometimes smooth, but sometimes rough. Sometimes we have to choose, are we going to continue walking or are we gonna stop? There's a perfect time to rest...

This is a wonderful piece, Elisa. Souls are really searching for peace...and we are not different from those souls. We are on our own ways...we have our own lives- our own paths to be taken.

Good job!

Thank you so much Dhaye :)

[Renée]

it is the journey..
the walk along the way
the stops that have so much meaning
until we do join the earth once again...
I love the last 3 lines especially.. perfect closing to a lovely poem ( : Welcome back E L !!

Thank you so much sweetie :) I feel happy to be back, and warm welcomed by you!

[Renée]

I can't wait to read more of your new thoughts ! ( :

Aw, no rush lovie, for it's no homework hehe... but I'll be pleased to see you always around! xo :D

[Renée]

never work to read your thoughts.. I will savor them one at a time ( ;

Aw, the feeling is mutual with your writings, for they are pure, and to the point, which I adore. :D

[Friday]

..."I shall transit.." Yes! Very vivid piece in a way with a nice simplicity in the wordings it still says a lot. I like the way the wording of the piece fits very consistently throughout. Very fine. Thanks!

Thank you fine sir, for this lovely review :)

[Petra Vlah]

"Where eternity continues…/I shall transit" great understanding and acceptance of what life really is - a journey to be explored and cherished. Very insightful

Thank you very much Petra :) great to have you around!

[ENJOY A CUP OF COFFEE]

I love this, it is beautiful, and vivid. Thank you for the great poem!

Thank you so very much Cheyanne, for your time and visit here :) very appreciated!

[ENJOY A CUP OF COFFEE]

You are very welcome!

[David Scott]

Eli, this poem is from a searching heart. I could feel the path these words were born on. Thank you for glancing back at us... I will cherish this write.
One suggestion, either drown or be drowned. Not "be drown".
Lovely Eli. Simply lovely. :)

Thank you my friend, for I'm forever musing. Well said. :) and thanks for catching that typo! you're the best! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"there where i donate the earth my last breath"

what a great closer.

this has a mix for me...first of all, i love the feel of it...i love the road down which it takes me.

but there is a combination of sadness and strength...

i keep moving, i am strong on the road, and nothing can interfere or impede with my journey...but the sadness is in the stopping along the way...seems this speaker gets hurt when she stops and makes ties with places or people...

this is my favorite write from you...

jacob

Well said well said jacob! chapeau. Really. ;) Thank you so much!

[Frieda P]

Delightful and dazzling musings here mys sweet friend, this has a calm to it, and a peaceful reassurance that all is well, one step at a time..one foot in front of the other, what more could we ask of life. This is you at your best cara, love it!

Grazie Teso, for I thank you for this review, It's indeed so well said by you. No rush, no harm, no pain, just acceptance, of life... till it's there, till it's there. Thank you dearly my Sis.

[Frieda P]

You know your writing always touches me in a special way, you have an elegance and grace about your poetry that reads Elisa all over it...my pleasure always my sweet sister. Baci x

Sigh, wow, you are the best! :) I think you have that too, for nobody writes, as profound as you Friedangel ;) Baci da parte mia xx

P.s. I must laugh about myself now, "Unconcious thought about foodies lol " if I read my sponteneous nickname to you backwards he!! I must be hungry for sure ;-)

[Frieda P]

ha you must still be thinking of that feast last night....Buona Appetito! Lol xo

Yeah I did.. ;-) that was so delisciously cooked, and prepared by you!!! ♥ xo

[Frieda P]

Can't wait for our cook off! We'll be happy little piggies after that ;-)

Haha, oh yes... you must roll me to bed then ok? promise? haha.... for I had probably too much Chianti, in a good conversation with you... P.s. I will roll you too ;) haha

[Frieda P]

Sounds like much fun, I can't wait, perhaps I should dieting now, Lol....xo

Haha oh me too, I still have some good oldschool Billy Bootcamp DVD's I will pass them over ;-) ha!

[Frieda P]

Bootcamp, geez that's gonna be some serious eating if I have to do that! ;-)

Haha, exactly, first we do his Bootcamp, ;-) then the Bootcamp of Apuglia ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

OMG you say Apuglia and I want to go NOW ;-)

ME TOO!!! ;-) let's buy such a fairytail home there ;-) and invite our besties on WC in it. We COOK!!! lol x

[Frieda P]

Perfecto, let me win the lottery first and we're off! ;-)

Haha oh about that love, the lottery fell here in my street, but I didn't had any lots, how sick I was of that!!!! urgh! ;-) ok, new days, new chances hehe...

[Frieda P]

Oh that's not good, silly woman you! We'll find a way, don't worry, we're warrior butterflies we can do anything Lol ;-) xo

Sure we are. For warrior women, shall survive. xo :D

[Clockwork]

I really like how you portray the road and the journey in life. You embrace your path upon it and set out to discover what it has in store for you. This sounds like a great philosophy for living and finding: "Where eternity continues…/I shall transit." One of my favorite lines there. I also like the idea of donating your last breath to the earth. That shows separation from the body and detachment from material things. You freely accept the end of the road and walk into the next avenue of the journey. I like this quite a bit.

My friend, thank you dearly. For you and I aren't afraid for this I think, (I feel it out of your answer) which is so good and profound. It's a present to me, to have your thoughts by tonight (here). Good to read your imput again, thanks again. :) Eli

[Clockwork]

You are quite right in your feeling. You're welcome! Its good to come by and read you again :-)

:) Thank you so much friend! I will come by for you can't wait, have missed your writings!

[Clockwork]

Aww, thank you :-)

You are most welcome... ;)