~ Refreshment

~ Refreshment, A poem about my hate-love relationship with Poetry. Nothing more need to be said.

~ Refreshment

 

 

She decided to give her heart

              Back to the moon,

   Where she belonged;

           So that her heat could sizzle softly

       On this fresh skin, to be one again;

 

After being sun-baked inside

           For too many months, even years,

  And feeling over burned by the love,

              Of his tangible forged iron(ic) arms of heat.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

The love - hate relationship with Poetry
Enjoy!

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Indeed, we all need to refresh our minds and take a little break from the sizzling sun.
What better place to be than in the arms of the moon for comfort...such as poetry, my dear Eli.
You have softened the intensity with your tender words, yet we writers know all too well that it can absorb every ounce of our being. Therein lies the love-hate relationship...

Magnificent write Sis!~xoxo~

Thank you so much Sis, you always understand it beautiful words.... :) makes me happy that you enjoyed this little one xoxo :) (i'll be back later fully)... hugs

[Scott Metro]

A cleansing of sorts..a liberation..but as a poet ..only temporary..
Enjoyed this Elisa...a good write.
Scotty

Thank you, for reviewing this oldie... :)

[Scott Metro]

My pleasure Elisa...

You got it so well... :) always good to have you by! :)

[Scott Metro]

Always my pleasure

[Lover Of Words]

Oh how this one has much meaning. Refreshing our mind heart and souls are aways needed.

Thank you my friend. :) Indeed, I'm a poet, who needs a break now and then, from writing, and be in quiet times, without anybody around me, how harsh that may sound... for best results... xxx till soon sweetie :)

[Inda]

Love the flow here and the way you gently take us through the whole thing is just amazing.

Thank you so much sweety, for these words, and for giving me a read :)

[Thomas Kainaroi]

This has an overwhelming sense of peace. Strange, the current short story I've been working on has someone going into the sun.

Thank you Thomas for reading, and your review... I'm curious about that one...interesting!

[Muse]

I enjoyed this. I liked the metaphor of being sun-baked inside. I guess maybe we all feel that way as we near the end of summer. But can one be burned by love? I suppose so....but it leaves a beautiful tan. ;)

I'm happy you enjoyed this one Beth. So good to see you back! It does haha it does ;) you always understand me! will be back for you ;) x

[Muse]

Good to read you again. And you are welcome. xo

[Revery]

Hmm, such an alluring write Elisa. Just beautiful. Refreshing, new beginnings, and sometimes simple adjustments are necessary but it takes us too long to open our clutched hands and just release and fall into the arms of the moon.

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you so so much G. Always for your words...

[Frieda P]

Ah love your moonshadow here, we need to get out of the sun, especially when we're not armed with the right SPF....your poetry is refreshing in and of itself, missed reading you my sweet sweet friend!

Beautiful review Frie, and thoughts, thank you.... :) I'll be back to read you, can't wait!! just a bit busy right now, but saw you were back so had to pop in :D x

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, I've missed my dose of Eli, always good for the soul, take your time, I'm hanging around. ;-) xo

And I missed you... I'm watching a movie now, but can't wait to delve into yours... oh we all missed you! :) xoxo much love!

[Frieda P]

Love the new avatar by the way, bellisima! Love you muchly dear! xo

Awww thankies... *blush* hehe... love you too! so so happy you're here again *__*

[Wakeofahero]

Well done! I found this written well! I loved the part about the moon and relation too it. Nicely done!

Thank you very much my dear friend. :)

[TPK Stories]

I can see where the love/hate relationship with poetry comes from. Keep up the great work.

Thank you so much!