~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

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~ The Poetic Mosquitoes, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fun with words, Mosquitoes, To replace yourself for a day into one parasite...

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~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

 

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

They dance, look, and fly;

Circles around the light,

 

They are hungry, they want,

They always fly out of sight

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

 

Armed warriors, in the air,

They think large, nor small,

They are forever musing after all,

 

And when you don’t expect them,

They suck your essence fair,

 

Watch out!

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes just

Will be there…

 

Slurping, your poetic blood

From your Poetic brain

From May until the fall,

 

The Poetic  Mosquitoes,

Are around, and they simply

Do watch you all…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura



© 2013



Author's Note

Dear readers, ghost readers, and little mosquitoes,
Have fun! :) (I thought, being bitten so many times, on my
nephews wedding party tonight how it was to replace myself into a mosquito).
Another experiment. Have fun!

Enjoy! xx



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an experiment well executed ....bbbbzzzbbbzz
love the intertwining thoughts that I have when reading this...amazin' beauty writer
now I wonder what was your hypothesis...hahaha*)
this is just a great write from content to concept from thought to your words-adored it
bbbzzzbbbbzzzbbbzzz....and I hate that spray bad for the ozone and so darn smelly...*)
wonder what you use on poetic mosquito's....pens with no ink, oh no wait this is a new era...
Wi-Fi signal drop.....hahaha just kidding see how fun this piece is?
have a super great beauty writer kinda day...and thank ya for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Haha, thank you sweetheart xo, Oh it was pretty simple... ;) read the authors note lol... I find it .. read more



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Wow, Ellie, I saw your author's note, but while reading this, I definitely didn't interpret it as being inspired by *literal* mosquitoes!!

As I read it, I thought of it as either critics, or people who didn't necessarily understand your poetry, constantly demanding that you write for them! But then, in the literal sense, yes, I hate being surrounded by mosquitoes too!!!

Reading it that way, I think of being in the jungle in Brazil, with gigantic mosquitoes sucking the life out of you. So the poem works in so many ways (as all of yours do). Wonderfully funny and enjoyable, and a surprise read! You have helped brighten my day, my friend!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Haha thank you, it's an oldie, and you remind me again of that evening, where we all were bitten to .. read more
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haha... this made me giggle about the time on my incident about bedbugs...
Mosquitos and Bedbugs are much the bloodsuckers i hate... ;D
Paxie the bedbug hunter is outnumbered by mosquitos now, can't do it alone ahh... lol
kidding...

a creative fun piece big sis!

I love the rhyming here like a childrens song, there is a melodic tune i am singing while reading this in my head... amazing big sis...


Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Haha lovely brother, your review makes my day, thank you always for the fun and humor dear xoxox :) .. read more
I love how you have a different way of looking at things! I really like the way you described the mosquitoes as Armed warriors. Great poem and with a brilliant flow.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much deary! :) I see them as warriors, for the have an sting/angle... :) it's fun how .. read more
Ouch, just slapped one of your poetic mosquitos - nasty things. Should be put down alongside their sordid verbal darts and strange connivances. Trust you to spray your thoughts over them. If you could do the same in my multi dimensional world, would be very grateful, dear friend! Great post.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Haha Emster love, you make my night with this review, lol.... I will I will, I just bought another e.. read more
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

Thank youuuu xx
I loved this! Indeed, poetic ideas (mosquitoes) do take up a lot of our time if we are truly poets. We see a scene and think immediately how to write about it....how to share it with the world. What wonderful metaphor here! Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweet Lydi! :) happy you enjoyed this one!
Ha hate the bloody buggers, but love this! Seems they're everywhere, even on poetry sites, need a zapper for the WC! Only you could make mosquitos enticing my friend! I remember the one's in Italy were like B52's, you could hear them from a mile away as they zoned in on their target, reminds me of something....great one Eli!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Frieda!!!! :D so good you're back, and thank you for this review. HAHA a zapper for the WC lol you c.. read more
Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Ahh, Zanzare's yep, I forgot what you call those pests, when I was there with my sister Lee, she use.. read more

4 Years Ago

Those teasing Zanzare... hehe... haha she's right your beautiful Lee. :) those memories are never to.. read more
love this!! ive just killed 5 mozzies. totally can relate to this. haha

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Oh and here it's summer, ofcourse, you live down, and me up.... :D strong ones at yours then !! good.. read more
Hana Saemon

4 Years Ago

yeah they are commando mozzies. haha! keep writing :)

4 Years Ago

I will dear, thanks so much, be back for you!! xo
Another brilliant piece my friend, love the concept, well executed.
I'm very fortunate here in California, I only see a couple here and there.
Keep up the great writes my friend, nice to see you back :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much sweet T. :) I will dear, for you and close friends!! hugs!
well this could go two ways as many writes can...but it is a fun one E L ! Miserable little suckers aren't they ? lol they can be a muse or just little blood suckers feeding ... ( ; very creative !

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Renée

4 Years Ago

No they don't ... but we are careful

4 Years Ago

Okay okay.... interesting, I will keep my eyes, and news feed onto this forever open thanks to you, .. read more
Renée

4 Years Ago

( ; xo
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I'm quite fond of the mosquito, myself. I won a spelling bee in the sixth grade by correctly spelling the word! I know, I know...hard to believe myself.

They are such annoying little creatures, though I haven't experienced them here in California. Perhaps they're too busy sipping Margarita's by the pool. ; )

Thanks for the memory, hun! Have a wonderful evening ~ Kelly.





Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

Oh that's so so good of you Kels! oh I did doubt if it was spelled Mosquitos or Mosquitoes, I asked .. read more

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