~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fun with words, Mosquitoes, To replace yourself for a day into one parasite...

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

 

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

They dance, look, and fly;

Circles around the light,

 

They are hungry, they want,

They always fly out of sight

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

 

Armed warriors, in the air,

They think large, nor small,

They are forever musing after all,

 

And when you don’t expect them,

They suck your essence fair,

 

Watch out!

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes just

Will be there…

 

Slurping, your poetic blood

From your Poetic brain

From May until the fall,

 

The Poetic  Mosquitoes,

Are around, and they simply

Do watch you all…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dear readers, ghost readers, and little mosquitoes,
Have fun! :) (I thought, being bitten so many times, on my
nephews wedding party tonight how it was to replace myself into a mosquito).
Another experiment. Have fun!

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

an experiment well executed ....bbbbzzzbbbzz
love the intertwining thoughts that I have when reading this...amazin' beauty writer
now I wonder what was your hypothesis...hahaha*)
this is just a great write from content to concept from thought to your words-adored it
bbbzzzbbbbzzzbbbzzz....and I hate that spray bad for the ozone and so darn smelly...*)
wonder what you use on poetic mosquito's....pens with no ink, oh no wait this is a new era...
Wi-Fi signal drop.....hahaha just kidding see how fun this piece is?
have a super great beauty writer kinda day...and thank ya for sharing

Haha, thank you sweetheart xo, Oh it was pretty simple... ;) read the authors note lol... I find it most lovely everyone reads this one into his/her own way... :) I like your bbbzzzbbbzzzbbbzzz moments :D It's just we have so much mosquitoes here in this clime and hot / humid temperature right now, I was bitten so badly yesterday lol, I forgot to bring my spray... my nieces and friends too, everyone was bitten, we were all doomed. LOL. That's a great interesting thought... it could be typ-ex, ink eraser, or maybe magic lol.... I laugh about this fantastic review, thank you dear Holly, (a little later this evening I try to read your fantastic experiments, and poetry) can't wait :) xx

[shallimarRose]

Well you know when I saw the title "poetic Misquotes" I just had to take a peek...
I wrote one about the Dragonfly once.. I really enjoyed this.. shallimarRose

Thank you so much dear, Oh have you posted it on here? I will def. come by to read... :) hehe I know sweets... :) you're the best, when time is sweet to me, I shall come by for a few of yours, and give you my heart, thanks so much! Elisa

[shallimarRose]

Do I have about 500 poems and posting a few at a time.. I will dig it out for you and send you a rr..
shallimarRose

Me too as much like that, although the half is unpublished ;-) hehe, under re construction. oh love, I don't do RR'S, for I believe in spontaneous reviewing, and love, on the moment, like you came by tonight, but mail me the link, I will def. come by for that particular one! much love!

[shallimarRose]

OH ok.. I was requested by some so have only recently began to send rr as I post. I am rather new to posting on this site so not a lot know me here yet.. xo

I know, I know, dear, since I came here, a few years ago, I found the RR's very stressful, (not meant) just so forced... I decided as a Dutch (with all due respect to others) to decline, and follow my own way to my favorite readers, for who I come definitely by, and all long heartfelt and really meant... when a review is forced, I don't feel natural anymore, I need to be my pure self to a write I love, and I love to give all on the moment for that particular friend. (I just can't do it so forced), it's maybe Dutch, I don't know, but when you see me it's honest, and real... and I will come by for you, for I've read a lot of you already and am in awe of your talent. Just sent me the link in a few days, when you have the time, I won't forget dear Shallimar Rose.

[shallimarRose]

Yes I understand.. Much like the ""tags"" on facebook.. I get so much tagged to me I cannot possibly read.. But here I actually encourage them to send me rr... I care for my mom 24/7 who fell in may and now cannot do anything on her own.. I dont have a lot of time to sift through writings.. Take care dear one.. xo shallimarRose

[Tate Morgan]

That was interesting I hate mosquitoes they are responsible for killing one third of the people who ever lived and died. They are the devil incarnate as far as I am concerned.However here we would say I wonder what It would be like to be a fly upon the wall .It has the same meaning though .Interesting concept well played out . You grow you learn same with me.

He my lovely friend, thanks so much, I"m just a hiking mosquito bite on the moment, I'm all itchy lol.... but so good, I killed some tonight! I felt like I was playing in Kill Bill. JK ;-) Thanks for your time Taters, till laters dear xo

[Tate Morgan]

You are so welcome saint of mine!

Thanks so much Tate! blessed be! xo

[Sherlock]

Hahaha nice one ... Great idea for a poem .., dedicated to mosquitoes

Thank you very much Neha :)

[gggg]

Hm. Now I get the feeling I am being watched. Damn, just when I wanted to turn in... ;)

Haha, dat is een goede... ik had nooit gedacht dat dit gedicht wat normaal niet mijn stijl van schrijven is zoveel recensies zou krijgen... best grappig, vind de jouwe heel geestig... ;) leuk dat je even langskwam, ik ben er na het weekend weer denk ik. Ik ga je lezen hoor!

[TPK Stories]

well written...loved how you compared poetic to mosquitoes...

Thank you so much!

[Rebecca Buller]

"Slurping, your poetic blood
From your Poetic brain
From May until the fall."

This was a brilliant piece, Eli! You've made even mosquitoes something pleasant to read about. It's a true testament to your genius, my friend:)

Thank you dear! for your wonderful words to me... hug!

[Rebecca Buller]

Hugs back:-)

[Edgar Perez]

After reading this i made up my mind.. And off i went to read this to my 2 year old niece, and she loved it just as much as I did! Giggling confirmed it. (:
This is brilliant. Silly funny and vivid. Perfect combination!

Aw, really that's too cute, you really humble me with your lovely words, thanks so much friend... This Dutchie is quite silly hehe, x Elisa

[Edgar Perez]

(:

[Ruhoun Q. Geins]

It has a very interesting premise. I always have an insect coil somewhere around my apartment so I'm not worried.

Ruhoun

Hey my friend, thanks for your tttttime and rrrrrevieuw, I'm just stuck to your coil for now and our poetic future I guess... ;-)

[wunder]

~i read this earlier-made me itch-in so many ways-lol-
whatever the hell that means (defines my laziness)-
only you could write beautifully for the little bloodsuckers~ ;)

Ah bud.......Thanks for the love and trust lol.... Scratching my whole body..... X

[wunder]

~lol~nuthin like an eetchy poem~ :D

Lololol.......... .

[wunder]

~~ :-D ~~

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my imagination flew with this one...

i thought of poets who are not really poets...but suck other poets dry...use them, abuse them, copy them...bleed them for inspiration...

and then fly into a wall of reckoning, and die.

okay so i am crazy...but this sent me there...:)

a very interesting piece of writing.

No, you're not crazy at all lol, after many of these thoughts, it made me think too, I just sketched this write slowly out, on keywords on my nephew's wedding party yesterday night... I thought, if my musical and poetic/artistic family would be all mosquitoes, and (on the same time we were bitten to dead)... cause it's so humid and warm here now, how would that be, to be for one day a parasite? and suck blood? others here beneeth gave me the idea, how it is to suck drunken blood... ha! :) It's so lovely everyone has his own strong voice to this one... thank you tons jacob! always nice to see you! truly appreciated.

* we were bitten to death I meant.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i gotcha! my friend.

[Ruhoun Q. Geins]

Jacob is one witty and brilliant geezer. You always have insights and translations that give the piece more impact. I'm glad I met you.

Sorry for eavesdropping,

Ruhoun

No worries mo chara, he is one of the best writers even as reviewers, sorry for the wrong 'u' in my previous response... I guess it was the coil....