~ And On The Final Day

~ And On The Final Day

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~ And On The Final Day, Travelers Romance, Love, Poetry Free Style, E.L. Elisa Laura Perfume

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~ And On The Final Day

 

 

There was a table for two,

   On the end of the train carriage,

       I smelled your perfume as light as the wind;

It felt more familiar than ever,

    It was like I made love to you from afar,

         By the pure smell of your skin;

And the smell merged with

     Robust heart notes mixed with a fresh

          Touch of citrus and lavender,

Soft as the wind, to spoil my nose,

      And then you grabbed my hand,

            You rough firm handshake, was your character,

One could blindly recognize you with;

      And so I turned around, and

             Swallowed in tenderness, of love

Red cheeks, as fresh  as wild roses,

       With some dew on it…

              No, it was you, I didn’t dream it,

And the sparkles in your eyes,

         Were as if I read the most beautiful novel,

                While I stared at you...

A novel, I almost finished; but kept on

          Reading and repeating,

                 So the last chapter would never end,

It just needed to be there... for eternity;

          Over and over again, in the train scene;

                  Where they finally met, on their way

To the heart of Barcelona…



 

           ~ Elisa Laura


© 2013



Author's Note

Thank you for reading xx

Sorry always for the many "edits" I am Dutch.
Just remember it, I catch up errors, all the time,
And I'm my own worst enemy ;-)
Not editing ever to be in the live feed....
I'm rather invisible ;-)


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Pax
How romantic, those moments, the first meeting of soulmates, the wonderful feeling it brought to the two lonely soul's journey, the noticeable bond between lovers - oh those feelings... i felt it here... a captivating scene you had brought us into this expressive piece... I really do like it...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you for being a passenger on the love train too xx



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And the sparkles in your eyes were as if I'd read the most beautiful novel, never wanting it to end. How lovely that sounds. How romantic you write, dear Elisa. Very well done. Looking forward to reading you more!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, for the lovely review my friend :)
Absolutely inspiring, and enthralling. I fell in love just reading this. Splendid work. This piece shines so vibrantly of absolute passion and affection. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so so much for being here, dear one! :) always a pleasure to read your thoughts. and I'm t.. read more
Arcus

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome, dear friend! :)
Such a romantic ballad with the perfect ending, as the train chuffs into the sunset!

Sweetly divine !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tom, I appreciate you and the visit!!
That was beautiful.I would like to be able to write on these subjects,but I think i'm too bitter! It was wonderful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Bob, p.s. bitter can bring beautiful art too :) I'll be back for your works :) I.. read more
Bob Sherunkle

3 Years Ago

Thank you..bitter brings you down though! Really enjoyed this piece.

3 Years Ago

Yes, it does... the thing is to balance, and pick out the perfect feelings of them both... thanks so.. read more
I'm enthralled. Inundated by a bizarre but pleasant feeling. It most definitely is the love and affection this piece brings along. Good work

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Manuel, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.
Manuel Samo

3 Years Ago

Pleasure is mine

3 Years Ago

I come by for you soon! :)
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Beautiful work,Elisa(as always). There is nothing like that first encounter of magic when your heart is pumping and your soul is glowing for someone else. You have painted that beautifully here:))))))


Cord

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my handsome friend. :) you know, life is just like a painting... you put all you c.. read more
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4 Years Ago

Feel better, darling :)))

4 Years Ago

For you I will... :))) x
Romance...I love it, Elisa...the imagery was vivid that I felt transported in view of this romance...a lovely write worth reading over and over again. ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Sigh, yep, I think you're right :) soooooooooooo right!!!! I'm not living in a prison, and when I di.. read more
€v De £'Am0r

4 Years Ago

Lol awww, be blessed, Elisa. :)

4 Years Ago

You too dear friend... blessed be~ :)
You engage the heart of your reader like no other, Elisa. This is immeasurable to define...
so enticingly romantic and pulsing with charm.



My best,
Kelly
x

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

So do you love, always when I enter your realm of poetry! miss and love you! hugs!x
You are far from invisible...
I like the picture. It was a beginning that had a pre ordained end... just a little way down the tracks.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear! really.

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