~ Air

~ Air

A Poem by
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~ Air, Elisa Laura, Sky, Nothingness, Freedom, Wings, Relativation

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~ Air


I flew over high mountains,

I could paint so many landscapes

With my eyes, looking down

On the seas and fields

 

The sun in me, warmed my soul

The wind was kind, and gentle

You were everything inside of me

My beloved air

 

You were the space,

Everything around me,

Nothing more than air,

For my blood, lungs and heart

For you I lived, without awareness

 

So dreaming and thinking the sky

I found myself in you,

And you my large cloud

My wave of passion

The storm of my core,

Mingled with me in our skies

 

My air, and I

 

~ Elisa Laura


© 2013



Author's Note

Music - B-Tribe - La Unica Excusa...
Enjoy! xx


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"My wave of passion

The storm of my core,"


Seems to stick with me. This foundation is what creates the person of tomorrow. Think about it. With no passion comes no ambition. It is something you can't explain, it's just something you have to do. Good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, I do love your take on this one.... :) Smiling here..... good morning f.. read more
RienKelsoCinema

3 Years Ago

Thanks!

Good morning from the US. :D



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I'm taking another read.


"My wave of passion

The storm of my core,"


Seems to stick with me. This foundation is what creates the person of tomorrow. Think about it. With no passion comes no ambition. It is something you can't explain, it's just something you have to do. Good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, I do love your take on this one.... :) Smiling here..... good morning f.. read more
RienKelsoCinema

3 Years Ago

Thanks!

Good morning from the US. :D
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Pax
“My air, and I”

Air, is what we breathe, it lives inside of us as it is a part of us, we can’t exist without it. And in love we feel empty without it.

“For you I lived, without awareness”

Oh those lines reminds me so much of how love comes to us without us knowing. And then we say how could I ever so blind, loving someone without even realizing it.

It's just so nice to read, love in many perspective, in many form, in many verse of your poetry big sis. Here is Air, another form of love. Filled our lungs to pump our hearts to keep it beating for us to live and to love. Refreshed!


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3 Years Ago

Oh exactly, we breathe, often we don't are grateful we do... :) well seen! bro :D smiling here. We s.. read more
Pax

3 Years Ago

yup, i always remind myself to be grateful even the little things in life. and most specially that- .. read more

3 Years Ago

So true...... :) I'm smiling
This is gorgeous! This poem totally captures the giddy feeling of first love and then the strengthening of that love.

Really enjoyed the visuals you paint, flying free at the start through golden clouds and then head first Into a sex storm! That's what I imagined anyway ;)

You've got some absolutely "spot on" ;) Lines in there, but I think "my beloved air" is my favourite, it's such a good metaphor for love because what's more important to life than air? Nothing.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend for your great review. I will be back for yours in the New Year, wishing.. read more
This is such a beautiful poem with nothing much I can add, which is an oddity. Some poetry spurs me to be forced to give suggestions, but this is clear and complete. It reminds me of a dream I had where I wasn't just flying, I was high up in the clouds like a plane. At one point I dipped down into the mountains, and then soared back up, feeling the cool clear air...I can picture this feeling very well and your words brought the dream from years ago right back.

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3 Years Ago

The feeling is mutual my friend. (hate it I lack in time right now lol). I wish I could live on a lo.. read more
Robert Tusitala O'Neill

3 Years Ago

Oh man, I have always wanted to live on an island alone in the sun. It might be lonely sometimes, b.. read more

3 Years Ago

I'm a bit of a loner sometimes... ;) you know HSP need rest, focus now and then ;) I think I would m.. read more
A very beautiful and impressive poem. Your skill shines in this write and I enjoyed reading it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear Tina, and goddes of the darker quill~ much love, will be back for you :D c.. read more
Interesting mix of placing the topic of your poem inside yourself. Within / Without. Kinda Cool.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, It is mainly a meditative aspect, many forget ;)
So very pretty...I love the way you find beauty in the simplicity of life..only a kind heart and soothed soul could see everything so close.....I am your reader now...you have pulled me into the serenity.

Bless you lovely soul...
Scott

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Scott Metro

4 Years Ago

I feel that you would be disappointed with my crippled abilities compared to your own.
I am a .. read more

4 Years Ago

Oh no! not at all Scott, you are a very very good writer, (I just lack in time), so busy, and when I.. read more
Scott Metro

4 Years Ago

Kindness.................
Surrounded and filled with the perfect passion, swimming through the air and drinking it in, drunk on the essence of the wind that holds you aloft, free-falling but never touching the ground, gliding on the gusts of effervescent love. Such delicate and magical imagery here. Just beautiful! :)


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4 Years Ago

Such great words here, my friend... you made me feel and reborn, like I flew like a true eagle. :) A.. read more

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