~ Air

~ Air, Elisa Laura, Sky, Nothingness, Freedom, Wings, Relativation

~ Air

I flew over high mountains,

I could paint so many landscapes

With my eyes, looking down

On the seas and fields

 

The sun in me, warmed my soul

The wind was kind, and gentle

You were everything inside of me

My beloved air

 

You were the space,

Everything around me,

Nothing more than air,

For my blood, lungs and heart

For you I lived, without awareness

 

So dreaming and thinking the sky

I found myself in you,

And you my large cloud

My wave of passion

The storm of my core,

Mingled with me in our skies

 

My air, and I

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music - B-Tribe - La Unica Excusa...
Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[RienKelsoCinema]

I'm taking another read.


"My wave of passion

The storm of my core,"


Seems to stick with me. This foundation is what creates the person of tomorrow. Think about it. With no passion comes no ambition. It is something you can't explain, it's just something you have to do. Good read.

Thank you so much my friend, I do love your take on this one.... :) Smiling here..... good morning from Holland :D

[RienKelsoCinema]

Thanks!

Good morning from the US. :D

[annabellee]

such a peaceful and enchanting write... absolutley wonderful :)

Thank you so much Annabellee :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like I'm living without gravity, I think.

I'm glad you felt so free after reading this one... :) thank you so much.

[Jack...]

For it is within you that I breathe, I see and I live...soaring through each day, not alone, unafraid...assured that you will always be...with me.

So very, very beautiful my sweet friend. Soft and tender your words float to me this night.

Thank you dearly sweet friend. From an early morning here I wish you all my best! :) see you soon, and will review as soon as I can :) always happy to have you around, and making me smile Jack! take care.

[...]

O my goodness...what a stunning breeze and dreamy hart kiss this was :)

lynn so good to see you! thank you so much :)

[...]

Good to see you too, lovely :)

[Rossen]

Golden moments I have you to thank for...
~Rossen

Thank you so much my friend... I'm so glad you felt these moments for a bit here... I will come back for you as soon as I can, must go now :( x

[rhythm&blues]

You took something as simple as 'air' and made it enticing and inviting, this is masterful in its delivery. Enjoyed the music too.

Thank you with whole my heart sweet friend, that means much to me. The Air, is so essential, we don't think of it, while we just breathe... and just live. But we should more often xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Masterful job Elisa... great use of metaphors to describe the gut wrenching pain and disappointment.

Thank Dale, I appreciate your thoughts :)

*Thanks I meant.....

[Michelle N. H.]

This is stunning. I couldn't help but to smile while reading :) You made me feel one with the words, and lighter for a while.. There's so much love here. Your feelings are radiant. They are everywhere, within and around the words. It's simply beautiful.

Hi Michelle, thank you so much for being here, and your wonderful comment :) Elisa

[Michelle N. H.]

:) You're welcome.

Yes I see it now love!! hah! it must have been somehow here hah! -x- thank you so much!

[Michelle N. H.]

We make absolutely no sense to whoever may read this, but yes, right here!! Haha xx

[Half Dream]

"You were the space,
Everything around me,
Nothing more than air,
For my blood, lungs and heart
For you I lived, without awareness

So dreaming and thinking the sky
I found myself in you,
And you my large cloud
My wave of passion
The storm of my core,
Mingled with me in our skies

My air, and I"


I adore the flowing verse in this piece. Such a brilliant write in here. You always turn my day to a day to be remembered! You're gifted writer Elisa!! I mean it. I love you sweetie. *hugs*

Thank you so much for your words... My dearheart... Love love you too xxx

[Half Dream]

Awww thank you for enlightening my soul with your words.. * hugs*

[Half Dream]

Love you more darling... :)

That's not possible lol!!! I love you the most ;) xx

[David Scott]

I really like this Eli!
Something as essential as air can be taken for granted but it represents everything and nothing all at once. We are nothing without it and it is the nothingness we are free to fly within.
You have outdone yourself here. Perfect!

Perfect review my friend, you got the essence very well of it :) thank you so much for your time, and coming by! always nice to see ya! :)

[David Scott]

It was a delight Eli.

I'm grateful to you! really I am. :)