~ Enter my World

~ Enter my World

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~ Enter my World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Dreams, Lucid, Second World, Fantasy, Analyzing, Classic, Venice, Italy, Masquerade, Love, Romance, Illusive

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~ Enter my World

 

 

From dark shades, and glimpses of reality,

I dreamt you all again, and so vividly

This time a little different though,

You all knew me, by the scent of life,

And followed me across the canals

To this castle where we seem to be now

 

I whispered through thin air, and clouds

Of fresh dew of March, you’d may enter

The gate of my heart, and as I wished I

Was there too, but I escaped

Into another chamber of thoughts

 

Yet, the masqueraded perfume still flew

Across the halls of hope, and the

Doors of the heart chambers, where locked;

The red ceiling, and the golden curls above

Merged with white plaster art

 

Where swinging  in front of the imagination of

Understanding this real dream, yet I felt it;

Far away music, from one of the rooms,

And I turned around, I saw you there

 

All standing and saying nothing;

And as we looked to each other deep 

In the eyes, so felt each other, and

Sang a song, of poetic dreams;

Of lucid dreams, inside of our distance

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2014


Author's Note



Enjoy another dream I had :) -x-

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It is curious how people that have never physically met can feel such a deep connection to one another. Coincidence upon coincidence may be no coincidence at all, but something that was meant to be.

We observe these commonalities, synchronicities, dreams that touch dreams that touch reality. At times we know what will come to pass by forefeeling as of visions from sleep, and I do wonder, now and again, why?

Really, that specific perfume you smelled, hours later I am still like, wuutt??

I am thankful for these invisible strings that connect minds alike, the works of the Universe, these magnetic vibes which brought me both of you. I know we are many in this wonderful write of yours for your heart is immense, a glorious castle, to house all :) It is where you have us dancing and singing, in your European warmth, we are beating too.

Nothing but love in your direction x

Posted 10 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Shell.... xx I love your Dutch! you speak it so perfect!!! :) I'm smiling from ear.. read more
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Lis ^^ I have a fine teacher! and google translator fills the gaps, hah.

10 Years Ago

Haha lol you are too funny! ;) and I never spoke so much Danish too lately! what a great language!!!.. read more



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Would you think it odd if I said I visualized this in the form of a ballet? Romantic and yet eerie and surreal at the same time filled with magnificent scenery, sounds and smells. Brava prima poetessa!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

No, not really odd at all.... this was a weird dream I had. It seemed I had a connection to 4/5 clos.. read more
Ashira Macy

9 Years Ago

I am sure it would turn out absolutely beautifully. =)

I don't actually speak Italian (.. read more

9 Years Ago

I am still waiting actually to continue this one lol... Let's hope it will enter again soon, (in my .. read more
It's so romantic and fascinating..and have I told you I love your choice of these pics they settle in so well with your writing like they were made for them.. :) the poem by all means was a pleasure read.. Ur truly gifted.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

So very kind of you Duaa, thank you with whole my heart... -x- :)
Elisa this is a dream boat filled with a romantic presence that opens the doors to us all to live our dreams. You write so well my dear.

Regards
Troy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear one, with whole my heart!! your words mean much to me. :)
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You melt my romantic heart with your beautiful poem Elisa… the poem is a truly magical write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Oh Dale, thank you so much for the support, and friendship, always so appreciated to hear from you.... read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

You owe me nothing sweetie, it is my pleasure to read your delightful poetry.

9 Years Ago

Thank you once again my friend, but I will.... :) for I love to read yours! :)
So romantic & dreamy Elisa! You have captured a connection between two people that distance separates perfectly. Beautiful! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for reading this one, it's one of the most important dreams I wrote out... fo.. read more
Chris Micha

9 Years Ago

Always! Dreams facinate me.

9 Years Ago

Me too... I'm studying them, and want to know every detail.... I even smell in my dreams... it's wei.. read more
Ciao bella! Fantastico. Ti amo, le tue parole e sentimenti!
Rosalind
-x-

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Grazie del cuore mia amica fantastica! Ti voglio bene, un bacione da parte mia... -x- :))
Dreams are shared by all! Here’s a tiny gift poem for you:

Dreams

Worlds touch from afar.
Every blazing star
must know who we are.
Dreams are this bizarre.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Beautiful, just beautiful.... and so true. Thank you with whole my heart. Buddy.
First of all, your english is adorable. In my time away from here i had actually forgotten how adorable your persistent english errors are that are pretty much your signature within each poem you write. I missed you sis. I sometimes have trouble deciding between considering you a big or little sister because despite your age i talk to you like i would to someone my age and your adorableness subtracts a few years. :P

The soul is such a mysterious thing... I hope that someday we will be able to at least BEGIN to understand its workings so that we can better understand why it is that certain people and things just click with us so naturally like there is some sort of calling. And if there is a calling, imagine the possibilities of what could be accomplished if we knew how to find them and use them to our advantage. And also to understand how we can feel so far away from someone despite being right next to them and the exact opposite. Hmmmm.....
You remind me of my girl and her dreams, she dreams abstract like you while i rarely dream at all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

I missed you immensely too. BUT :) I know you are always around... trust lays there with real friend.. read more
You have a tasteful way to imagery and creating a pleasant visual in ones mind while reading. I found your poem reaching and exciting. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

9 Years Ago

PR hahahaha WOW! I am smiling... as I have been referred to as PA in some occasions...

9 Years Ago

Haha really? lols... PR is better ;)
PoemRodent

9 Years Ago

Then you understood the PA remark... This is good... LOL

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Tags: ~ Enter my World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Dreams, Lucid, Second World, Fantasy, Analyzing, Classic, Venice, Italy, Masquerade, Love, Romance, Illusive

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