~ Appassionata

~ Appassionata

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~ Appassionata, Elisa Laura, Surreal, Love, Happiness, You & Me, Dancing, Music, Heartstrings, Romance... Dark Romance, Supernova, Connection, Stars, Sun, Moon...

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Appassionata

 

Where my thoughts, tingled yours,

In our sky, the clouds in hue;

Of dark fashioned happiness,

 

An embrace of your deepest

Inner feelings, saluted mine,

 

Two hearts

             One beat, 

                         Softly, tenderly

 

The rhythm of intense passion

Entwined us, as colliding stars

 

Where darkness, became our

Supernova, a dance of

You and me - unending.



~ Elisa Laura


© 2014



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Enjoy! -xx- :)

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What a masterful way of weaving through a cosmic connection... I absolutely love this, Sis!
It's dark, mysterious, and full of possibilities...light years dancing before you...intertwined in passion!

A romantic yearning is embedded in the stars.. (sigh)...

Lovely art,, Sis!...superb!~xoxo~:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Robbie~xoxo~

3 Years Ago

Yes, can't wait, Sis!.. take care, Beauiful!~xoxoxo~:)
Robbie~xoxo~

3 Years Ago

*Beautiful* :)

3 Years Ago

Love, I gotcha! :D you are the most beautiful! :) -xxx- will send pics, this weekend of my road-trip.. read more



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The perfection of true love set to words and beauty in "a dance" of subtle imagery...
This one's a WC classic!

I'm honored to make room on my wall of favs!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, your words mean much to me! Elisa :)
Wow ! I see once again why the rave !
outstanding performance on this verbal stage
Job Well Done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweetheart xxx :)
Cryingkate

3 Years Ago

A curtsey to you talented Friend. XOXOXOXOXO
A loss of words which is where your poetry leaves me... To bear ones self on the endless pages of a digital universe in such an outstanding way like this is so beautiful. I am captivated by this poem. Truly. xx

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear for this fine review.... Your thoughts are always so appreciated... X :)

"Two hearts
One beat,
Softly, tenderly"

Although I don't like romantic write. I have my personal reasons but reading this makes me rethink about that. That's the power of your words. You have a beautiful way in creating a soft and vivid touch in your words.
I'm thankful dearest for reading this. You made me smile! :)

Love you!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Maya, thank you so much my beautiful Sis... your words always mean so much to me, and yes, I know yo.. read more
Beautiful and good places you took me with in your words. Good to dance the dance of true and wild passion. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you J. not only for your words, but more, for being an unconditional friend, through thick and.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I feel honored to be able to read your words.

3 Years Ago

I feel honored too, to read, you, and I do, in silence... always.
There is so much light and wonder in your poetry, Elisa...it must resonate from within you! I adore this!


Love,
Kelly

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much love, your words mean much to me, always.... :) it came right out of my heart, to .. read more
Such sweetness could only come from your pen Elisa :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you with whole my heart my friend, I'm so happy you can feel my heart through this, as for fri.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are welcome sweetie .Love to you too :)
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ANM
Very good no more to say!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much ANM :) it's very appreciated.
ANM

3 Years Ago

You are as always welcome!

3 Years Ago

Thank you again..... it means much.
Oh, now *this* sounds like true love, indeed! It's as if both your spirits, across many worlds, just came together in that moment, and nothing could keep you apart - not time, not space, not separate lives.

And this poem, like many of yours, is quite song-like, in its rhythm - that adds so much to reading it, I think. In fact, I imagined a melody to it in my head...I can hear a Spanish flamenco guitar accompanying the words, and perhaps male and female singers singing in counterpoint.

That may be *way* beyond what you had intended, but of course, every reader will come up with his or her own interpretation. And lastly, I truly love the title - it is perfect. Wonderful work, my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Eric, I like your interpretation, and it's fantastic you can hear the Spanish flam.. read more
The rhythm of intense passion
Entwined us, as colliding stars
Where darkness, became our
Supernova, a dance of
You and me - unending.

Ah.... flying in sky when I read it. Rachna jo dil ko lage. Great one dear.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you so so much for your kind words, dear one. :)
Saddam

3 Years Ago

pleasures mine dear.

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