~ Mirrored

...Look, and thou shalt see...

 

~ Mirrored

 

 

Sheer reflection seen, in the distance,

Eyes wide open, wings spread wide

You saw me coming,

         From a thousand spring times,

                   Waiting there down the river,

I never believed, I could be alive again,

To breathe after so many lifetimes, of death~

           But you gave me the hope,

To kill this purgatory

Where I’d wait for hell, too long,

Now in this realm, it all starts, whilst I’m gone

          And so you will live, be there,

      All with a drop of silence

    Mirrored through me, with me

Welcome to Elysion, my love,

           Feel at home…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

It might feel as if looking into a mirror whilst looking into another's eyes and seeing their soul. There is similarity, yet a divergence, certain parts of opposition that come together to create completion, unison, and it is most powerful. You blend colors in the chamber of the heart. It is there forever, the entrance to your infinite land of Elysion, always accessible, and a shared home, ever reaching for the ones you love.. The whole time, I sensed the journey of a butterfly, a revival, and so a new beginning. It's as if someone showed the way, but it truly starts with one's own strength of mind, or heart.. I feel embraced every time I come here. It's just that vibe of yours.. xx

Thank you love, for this gorgeous review, sigh, if it wasn't you Shell, who get's me, I don't know anymore lol you really did felt/sensed all so well. It's true, there is a new beginning, a strong one, a real one, and I'm glad, to be there. And to take you with me on the journey! :) You are embraced with my two both arms, and you know what? your present brings luck... it protects real good ;) I'm so happy with it still everytime I look at it. ^^ Thank you immensely for your words, and friendship dear one. -xxx-

[Michelle N. H.]

You're most welcome. I'm happy to know that my little present does bring a bit of luck and protection. It was my hope he'd fit in with the rest, heh. =) Thank you too, for being a friend of mine.. It goes deeper than that. I apologize for my late response. x

Oh and he did Sis... He just fits in perfectly. Heh =) no worries my sweetest, I know you are not always have the possibility to come online there, p.s. is your laptop fixed? I hope so...you are missed, but as always around, love it! Thank you for being a friend of mine, heart to heart... Hugs -xx-

[Michelle N. H.]

My laptop is not yet fixed. Perhaps within this week it will. I'm using my phone at this moment.. Thank you as well, once again, dear Lis. xx

Oh it will take some time ofc. say hi from me to everyone, and have a nice morning dear!! -xx-

Oops WC-Glitch, my answer got cut off... so here again: Thank you dear, you've graced me with your insight on this one. You get it so well... goosebumps. And I have a weak for the Greek too, you will notice some of my older pieces are related to them as well. I'm so thankful, glad you enjoyd the mystery of this one, ((HUGS)) Lis -x-

[willweb]

"I never believed, I could be alive again,
To breathe after so many lifetimes, of death~
But you gave me the hope,"

These lines right here gave me chills. This poem is beyond beautiful. Elisa, I am saving this to my favorites because I want to visit it often. I really enjoyed this today.

Oh thank you so much Will, for picking those out, those lines have a huge meaning to me, I'm ever so grateful Will. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sounds like a dream or a innocent Fantasy.

So much Imagination here also Exploring in a
different land of the Unknown

Quite Fascinating I loved this thank you for sharing.


Blessings. kindred poet

Thank you so much Kindred Poet, I'm really pleased you enjoyed this piece of me. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure. you're quite welcome. blessings. kindred poet

Blessings to you too friend :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is so magical, this world of Elysion where you live...to visit you there is like walking on clouds...

With the flick of your wand I become entranced, wandering through your mystical aurora....

Fantastic work of art...Love it!~xoxo~:)

Thank you for this artistic and gorgeous review Sis! "aurora" I always loved that word...
Be always welcome in Elysion Sis... there is a garden, to hang out, and there even is a sea with beautiful rocks for Mermaids under the moon lol ^^ I think we would have much fun.... -xxx-

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh Sis, that makes me teary eyed!! I absolutely love this piece... and it's home, indeed!...
I wish I could stay forever... but I'll stay as long as I can! (*.*) ~xoxo~

You can stay forever... for we are ethernal lol ;) -xxx- We just are!! Sis. Home is where we will be. **HUGS**

[Kenneth The Poet]

A welcome worth receiving.

Kenneth!! :) thank you my friend! :)

[Ruth]

Ohhh, reading you was always medicinal :) Never a dull word...so very beautiful ♥

Thank you so much love ... ♥ I can't wait to catch up on yours, have missed you! -xx-

[Ruth]

Missed you too hon xxx

[Alexx Wake]

You are beyond amazing with words...
I love the music you added too!
Definitely gave me chills while reading..
Overall I really enjoyed this; excited to read more from you.

Hey Alexx, so good to see you! hope all is well, thank you for the lovely words my friend.... :)
read moreHey Alexx, so good to see you! hope all is well, thank you for the lovely words my friend.... :)
I will come by for you too! ^^

My respond got cut off, here again: Hey Alexx, so good to see you! hope all is well, thank you for the lovely words my friend.... :) I will come by for you too! ^^

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Love can always bring the time back again and you have mirrored the reflections of thoughts wonderfully along with pictures superb!

Thank you so much Skyfall, for your kind words :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Raven Sis started feeling better and appreciate you being there for me.

The poem could be interpreted as that persons remain in purgatory until living persons think about the goodness those persons did when they were alive which leads to believe that spirits are in hell when persons do not think about them.

Thank you Raven Sis, and you are welcome, I'm glad I could be there for you -x- I do find your interpretation very interesting, as always... I have something to ponder about with you ;)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Elisa... some times we spread our wings
and we are open to feelings of kindred spirits
that we meet ... reminding us of love that
only is felt once in a great while. Your
poetry is gilded in golden touches of beauty.
truly... Pat

That's so true dear Pat, Lady of poetry, and joy! :) Thank you for the amazing words, and heartfelt review. -x-