~ The Journey of her Mind

~ The Journey of her Mind

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.... Soft whispers ...

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~ The Journey of her Mind

 

 

 

 

Enter her thoughts, with all the

Platonic love, your heart beats

And with all your daily inspiration;

 

Try to reach her soft silken lips

With the kisses of the wind

Tremble, and warmly cup her heart

Within your precious hands

 

Let her breathe, the sky

And observe what is underneath

And breathe with her, passionate

 

Love her like yourself,

Send her nothing but joy

And respect her living soul

 

There where water flows,

Like long rivers, as her blood

And her veins are with magic filled,

 

You may own her, live her...

          And be the journey of her mind.


 

 

~ Elisa Laura


© 2015



Author's Note

Enjoy my dears -xx-

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Elisa Laura,

Beautiful name for this write and photo to match. Nothing is more intriguing than piercing into the mere thought of peering…

As a man we should take heed to such a write – for there is never enough learning and understand and appreciation to the women in our lives. Beit for our mother, sisters, aunts, grandmas, girl (friends), daughters and most important our soul mate.

~ Legacy, Keep on Writing Life – Jan. 2015


Posted 2 Years Ago


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Elisa you are stunning ..... your words ...... !!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


a man must travel many a weary road to be worthy to partake of that apple, and onward to the tree of life

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Stunningly beautiful! All of it. the painting, the music, the words...the you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you incorporated nature into this piece! It makes the images so much more vivid, powerful. The title also just gave me an image of just walking across a bridge into her mind. The picture you added is stunning. You've left me speechless with this...truly mesmerizing words!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Elisa, This piece is so beautiful and runs very deep. Such vivid imagery exploding all over the page really intensifies and already intense write. I hope you don't mind but I'm going to send you a friend request, I hope that you accept. I look forward to reading more of your work. take care...dan (my real name...riki is a pen name)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elisa Laura,

Beautiful name for this write and photo to match. Nothing is more intriguing than piercing into the mere thought of peering…

As a man we should take heed to such a write – for there is never enough learning and understand and appreciation to the women in our lives. Beit for our mother, sisters, aunts, grandmas, girl (friends), daughters and most important our soul mate.

~ Legacy, Keep on Writing Life – Jan. 2015


Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hello Elisa :) It has been a while since I read one of your writes but let me say, they only get richer and more beautiful each time. This is such a gentle poem that emits a tranquil calmness to the reader.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply gorgeous poem. I love the surreal painting to it, and the melody of your lines...It`s full of allusions, love, and strong heart. Yes, she is living, and her heart beats under our steps, we have to feel that always, and she is observing us from her side. We have to keep her healthy, if we want to continue to live! but not everyone can feel the harmony of her elements, of winds, waters and rivers. You express it in unique way, just your style.. :)

:: n. nour ::

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the piece it's nice and delicate almost like a nursery rhyme something that makes you feel warm inside, and inspires you to appreciate what you have I love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I carry her to the moon and back in every moment...remembering that she lives in our eyes...lives through our souls...breathes through our knowing....blessing to you!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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