(Not) Over You

(Not) Over You

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Ok, so I'm in 'love' (I'm in HIGH-SCHOOL! PSH, YEAH RIGHT!) with this guy who's like... beneath my standards... I'm OBVIOUSLY trying VERY hard to get OVER him... it's impossible...

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You're not that special, 
I realize that.
If anything,
you're a bit fat...

You're a real slob,
you look like you haven't taken a shower...
you're always surrounded by girls...
I'm starting to wonder if you're a player...

Honestly, I shouldn't even like you!
You're nothing like what I want.
I'm trying so hard to get over you...
but for some reason, I can not!

You really should brush your hair,
and maybe try to dress up?
I'm questioning my sanity...
maybe I'm just a needy pup?

Everyone keeps saying you're nice...
but you keep ignoring me!
I question why I like you more and more...
maybe I'm just plain crazy?

I'm gonna get over you,
this I swear, 
ok, so maybe it's harder than I thought...
but I don't need to share (that particular thought)!!

As long as I keep telling myself your faults,
I'll get over you.
But until then...
I obviously have much to do!!

You're not that smart,
you're sort of ugly...
by the end of all this,
I will end up crazy!!

© 2011


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Really good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha, that's exactly how I was when I liked dis boy... =_=
But i'm over him...WAY over him...
I found dis good to read :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! It was a really good poem, and it kind of reminded me of a friend who has the same problem; he totally cheated on her, but she still isn't over him. It was a great read; thanks for posting!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was fun to read, I loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 24, 2011
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Tags: young love, frustration, annoyance, insults

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