THE DEEPEST NEED

January winds rushed through her hair

To Heaven she gazed in prayer

The depths to which she needed to go

Subterranean, two thousand layers

below the surface of shallow place

where the soul waits for him -alone

An ocean waiting for the one

waters raged, wind chilled to the bone

Heart calling to it's other half, Heart calling through the storm

His heart, her twin, the missing half that her soul now pulled toward

And staring high upon those stars, on Heaven her heart transformed

As God commanded Heaven's stars to assure she's no longer alone

The stars then told her he too waits, that he too sits out in the cold

Head down that night, neath Heaven's Gate, for the twining of their two souls.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Beautiful, deep and meaningful piece.
I like this very much! The mother in me feels this more as a maternal love... that soul deep love whether romantic or maternal will always call for the other and transcends realms and time.
Memorable words you give. Regards Ray

[M. L. F.]

Thank you very much. I have been on a hiatus, but appreciate your time in reading my work. I am glad it spoke to you, that is what matters.
..Misty

[Tony Jordan]

A beautiful write. The loneliness the recognition and then ...
One can literally feel the distance shortening between them as they meet.
So enjoyable.
:)

[M. L. F.]

You absolutely nailed the emotion of this piece. Wonderful... means I did my job right. So glad you liked the work..
..Misty

[Tony Jordan]

When the writings this good the reader just needs to let it wash over them to get all those feels Misty
:)

[Echoes of Eros]

Stirring, stunning words of such a vast transcendent story, and yet so intimate, so deeply personal. There is the soul calling out, and heaven's whispers, and all paths converging into the glory of this unfolding story of bliss. Waiting, it is so hard, but winter will fade and spring will come, and life will rise in wildness. Your words are filled with this magnificent, waiting life. xo

[M. L. F.]

You understood this piece on a deeper level and I really appreciate that.. so. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. Yes, waiting is hard, but quite manageable for those who wait patiently for the spring.

[Echoes of Eros]

I love gardens, and they have taught me that the most delicious fruit will come when given time to ripen. xo

[Lovecraft]

An exquisitely crafted poem about a persons soul mate, their one true love, the person they connect to most of all. I have to say, I believe this poem is one of your best, at least in my opinion. Congrats, Misty!

I really enjoyed it.

*Slow Clap*

[M. L. F.]

Hahaa!! Thanks Lovecraft! Happy.. I love to hear that the emotions came through for the reader powerfully.. Best compliment there is. Well... and "Exquisitely" crafted will also do! 😂

[Lovecraft]

I picked Exquisite because it suited this poem well.

:P

[Manu]

Beautiful one, misty.
Like magnets, two souls wanting to be together for eternity is their deepest desire. Her prayer has been heard and she got the one she desired the most at the end.

[M. L. F.]

Thank.you very much.. Happy to hear you enjoyed the piece.

[Diamond]

It's so damn gorgeous Misty... I love it. It takes me into the gloom of my own journey which is perfectly timed in the most unideal circumstances... I cry, I crave, I am mad and I just...love. Thank you for sharing.

[M. L. F.]

Ah, yes... I seem to be on fire with feels these days... It is pouring out in my work like a flood. I just know it's my time soon... I feel it. I feel it deep down. I am so glad to have helped bring out the same feelings for yourself... Hold on lovely Queen, It will come... ;)
Never ever, lose sight of your dreams, and remember: The people who tell you to give up on your dreams, are the ones who have long since given up their own... Misery LOVES company... ;)
Truly,
...Misty

[Diamond]

May all the love and light be yours my dear. I am sorry, I wrote very little about your poem in my comment.

[M. L. F.]

I'm off to sleep now, very tired. So tired, and yet I already feel greatly complimented by said review with no comments on the piece, because, your emotional reaction to the piece WAS the review.. ;) Reading between the lines... is so fun. Also, you sort of called it "damn gorgeous"... Also counts as a review! :) LOL..

Goodnight Queen..

[Diamond]

Good night :)