What if I Say...

What if I Say...

A Poem by Created to Write
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This was written with my crush in mind. Some girls have a new crush every few weeks. Mine has been on-going since two years ago.. about. By the way: he doesn't know.

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What if I say "hi"?
How would you reply?

Would you say it back,
Or look at me as if I plan to attack?

What if I say "you're cute"?
Would you refute?

Would you ignore me as if I was never there, 
Or be nice and say 'thank you' with care?

What if I say "I like you"?
What would you do?

Would you think I'm just kidding,
Or feel like life is just beginning?

What if I say "I love you"?
Because I want to.

© 2014 Created to Write


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Author's Note

Created to Write
I'm proud of this poem. It isn't my strongest suit.

FYI- I think 'refute' means to deny. Whether I used it right, you get what it means.

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"What if" is a powerful question. I am not very good at poems myself, but this one is good. It doesn't supply any answers, yet gives the reader a story. My only suggestion would be to add a little more here and there, either a statement or more questions to give a fuller story. But still Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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We never know the answer until we try. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Haha, i really really enjoyed this poem..and it's a lovely poem.

hugs,
pb

Posted 8 Years Ago


"What if" is a powerful question. I am not very good at poems myself, but this one is good. It doesn't supply any answers, yet gives the reader a story. My only suggestion would be to add a little more here and there, either a statement or more questions to give a fuller story. But still Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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