Bottle O' Wine

My love flows like a sea of tears

I cannot grasp how I find myself here

Kiss thy lips and stab my heart in fear

Running to a limit so I cannot get quite so near

 

Tell me goodbye and close your eyes

Let me let go and break all ties

A need to escape before I lose this heart of mine

O please tell me goodbye and let me fade into a bottle of wine

 

You loved me once and held me tight

Until like a ghost, you fell from my sight

Thee mind games I do not play

Leave me now or kiss me and say you'll stay

 

Tell me goodbye and close your eyes

Let me let go and break all ties

A need to escape before I lose this heart of mine

O please tell me goodbye and let me fade into a bottle of wine

 

Yet each night I close my eyes

To forget is a plague on which I’ll die

But to remember will drain it all from me

My very soul and heart you’ll be

 

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

I like this style of poem and even more the theme there is nothing like a nice drop of wine to intoxicate and fill us with passion it really sets the love juices flowing,how i would love to be with this beautiful lady in this picture you paint with her glass of wine in one hand and her pushing her hand through my hair in the other as sweet kisses are exchanged between lovers and the tender sweet cherry flavoured lips tate the profound necture of sweet love.

[Marlena]

Very lovely, the emotions you played off of in this were perfectly portrayed. Great work, thanks for entering!

[bluessadmood]

Oh you are so great in all ,this was lovely too..there is something different in your writing and I just love it..
My love flows like the sea..I kiss the lips and stab my heart for I am in fear,I run to a limit so I wont get so near
Say goodbye and close those eyes,let me go and break out of all,need to escape for I will lose this heart and mind
I will say goodbye and fade in a bottle of wine..you loved me once and held me tight,like a ghost you fell from sight
Mind games dont like to play..I will break of all ties and get lost in lots of wine..yet each night I try to forget,like a plague and I die
This was again so lovely so enchanting ...like magic
lovely write..

[~Shadow Kissed~]

O please tell me goodbye and let me fade into a bottle of wine
My favorite line :) really good :)